Reviews for Within Your Eyes
Slytherin Studios chapter 24 . 1/29
I love your story, please update soon.
Guest chapter 24 . 2/9/2013
Good story. Just read the whole thing. It was a nice idea and was intriguing. Even though you already wrote it here are some critiques for the sequel and other future writings you do. You really need to work on grammar and spelling and the formation (putting two different people talking in the same paragraph) Those mistakes really take away from the story and no one wants that! Anyways, just trying to offer helpful feedback! P.S: I loved how you wrote Marko's personality and such, he is adorable! Their relationship was cute!
guest chapter 22 . 2/9/2013
You keep messing up peoples names. Like you called David, Davis. And you keep mixing the girls names up. It makes it confusing
Mrs. Ace Merrill chapter 24 . 2/10/2013
Oh my gosh:( update!
Best Guest chapter 24 . 2/5/2013
That's It? Sucky ending... Although i still love this story but how can you leave Aislin and Marko's relationship like that? I can't wait for the sequel. :)
HoneyGee08 chapter 24 . 2/5/2013
greatt!
miseryXlovesXmyXcompanyX chapter 24 . 2/5/2013
Omg I CANT WAIT FOR THE SEQUEL!
Bethmaemaslow chapter 23 . 11/11/2012
Omg I forking love your story plz
Write more )
TheLostBoysLover19 chapter 23 . 10/13/2012
This is my favorite story please update soon.
HoneyGee08 chapter 23 . 10/11/2012
Great update soon
LovelyReader92 chapter 23 . 10/9/2012
I love the chapter especially the ending... Aislin and Marko. :)

Update soon.
kittykat6625 chapter 23 . 10/9/2012
yahhhhhhhhhhh another chapter awesome thanks for updating

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miseryXlovesXmyXcompanyX chapter 23 . 10/8/2012
I have been waiting for an update for ages! Awesome new chapter! :)
miseryXlovesXmyXcompanyX chapter 22 . 8/13/2012
please update soon :)
kittykat6625 chapter 22 . 8/2/2012
awesome chappie keep up the good work :]

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