Reviews for Allelujah's Payback
Guest chapter 1 . 1/24/2015
So hilarious
On Hiatus. Back Later chapter 1 . 11/29/2014
Oh no no no please stop! i cant stop laughing!
sDan12 chapter 1 . 7/9/2014
Haha this was adorable _
Grey Wolf4 chapter 1 . 3/21/2013
Pretty funny! _
Farhanah Atiqah chapter 1 . 7/13/2012
Ms. Unknown Girl 23 chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
very funny! come the toilet's flushing system is connected to the shower?
popculturerebel chapter 1 . 2/7/2011
Very funny! The "Wait...Tieria's a guy?" part is hilarious..

Him singing a Spice Girls song has WTF written all over it D

It's kinda cute that Allelujah and Marie teamed up to prank him...

2 Thumbs up! D
Yuriski-1st chapter 1 . 1/18/2011
""Wait…Tieria's a guy?" Marie asked."

Yes he is...but i can't overlook how natural he acted in a dress and how good he danced with high heels...
Liz7147 chapter 1 . 1/2/2011
This was an adorable oneshot. I loved the "Tieria is a guy?" lol My sister and I always make fun of him because he looks like a tranny XD I can totally picture him singing Wannabe. Haha very cute
Captain Red Tape chapter 1 . 11/5/2010
I expected there to be some elaborate prank, but no, there's just a toilet flushing, you'd think that celestial being would have the tech to fix that. That doesn't happen to me and they live 300 years in the future. But oh well, this is the first story on this site that made me laugh. Thanks.
Captain Zeug chapter 1 . 11/1/2010
I couldn't help but find this incredibly charming.

As far as the writing goes, it's surprisingly just fine. I couldn't find any mistakes, minor or major.

Now, I don't know much about Gundam, as I said on MB, but there doesn't seem necessary to have any prior knowledge of it for reading this.

This was childishly funny and cute, and I couldn't help but smirk at the idea, even if I don't know the characters. The ending was also humorously ironic.

Spot on, mate.