…Why are they watching him do it with Sally?

Who lays 8n a bathtub in boxers, ridiculous. I don’t want you to write a 12 yr old nude but there are a million different way that could have went that stayed pg13 and made sense.

some parts are really confusing to be honest such as what is the absolute point in purposely missing?

i swear if poseidon and percy have a bad relationship-

Bruh, such a BIG mistake you made here.

Dude, Fenrir is the main god and a really powerful one. I don't think even OP Percy can kill him that easily

I just noticed...Annabeth was in love with 20 year old

Hope Percy and Poseidon have a healthy relationship

A NO, LET IT BE SOMEONE UNIQUE
B OFC
C YES THE PLAY AN IMPORTANT ROLE
D NO

I imagine the Olympians, plus Hades and Hestia, voyeuring Poseidon and Sally.

I know you mean Annabeth but all children of Athena have blond hair.

Atrocious Grammar and all but if I cared about that, I wouldn't have been reading PJO Fanfics of all things. That said I really like how Poseidon's fatal flaw is loyalty. It explains so so many things.

I am sad about Percy and poseidon are not talking anymore

fAtHEr oF hOrsES

I know this doesn't matter now, but I think that
A. Percy shouldn't fall for Annabeth. I think in the canon everything happened perfectly so they got together. Here in the alternate universe, it shouldn't be the same.
B. Thalia should still be a hunter. The Titan's curse forced her to become one unless she never survived her tree.
C. Hades should still bring out Nico and Bianca because they play big roles. Even though Percy has death powers, Bianca and Nico have their own duties (Ghost King, etc.).
D. Lastly, as, much as I want an appearance from the Romans, they play no role in this story.