Reviews for Please Please Me
kikyotwosoul chapter 5 . 4/3/2012
Will you write more?
Asdfjkl chapter 5 . 1/29/2012
Awesome story so far, can't wait to read the rest!
killing u with umbrellas chapter 5 . 11/8/2011
loved it
Stepchild chapter 4 . 11/8/2011
Whoa, this story is great! I really love how shy matty is*-*

though I hope he falls for mello soon! they match better :P

please update soon!
Patrickhere chapter 4 . 9/16/2011
Loooooove it :) please continue soon!
killing u with umbrellas chapter 4 . 5/12/2011
loved it. please update soon.
leofant chapter 4 . 5/2/2011
Please please me and keep writing this story! i don't know why it got so few reviews, but i sincerely think it's one of the best fanfictions i've read (and i've read a lot). it's so cleverly written, and you really portray the characters in a unique way without making them ooc, which seems to be a very hard thing even for the best of fanfiction writers. it's also such a heart warming and witty story in general, and i love it. can't wait for an update!
BehindHappyFaces chapter 4 . 1/2/2011
wow I've never read halle to be so... sincere(?), in most of the other fics shes stared in (that ive read) shes been portrayed as a cougar or super controlling. I actully kinda enjoy reading her in your portrayal :) props
Kari Twilight Mist chapter 4 . 12/15/2010
1. my computer died around this time last year so I feel your pain I really do. My condolences. :( 2. YES! Ugh I have an uber long fic and another to go and it's not just the women it's characters in general. They stick to the same group so much that the little ones aren't even memorable most of the time so I'm gonna have to bust out a ton of minor OCs for sales clerks and such even more so than now. There are so few cannon characters I look at Death Note Wikki and I'm like "who is THAT?" 3. This is AMAZING and I love the great grammar, spelling, "big word" usage. Seriously this is one of the most "adultly" written fics on this site in that aspect. Tierfal is the only other author I've seen to use this quality of work. I'm really looking forward to reading more. b-d
ThJo chapter 4 . 12/13/2010
Condolences on your laptop:(

Don't call this shitty, it's great! The way Matt was being so nervous around Halle was really good, believable and really cute . And I love Halle's character. She's cool XD

Hm, I'm not really good at reviewing... -.-'

Update soon? .

- ThJo
tebrighteyes chapter 4 . 12/9/2010
I'm really loving this. You have such a great writing style and yeah Halle rules!
Axcent chapter 4 . 12/9/2010
I... Am dropping you and your fabulous story a review. Finally. Heh. It is fantastic, really. I've just neglected to slip it into favourites yet. I was constantly worrying over the word "monolygamy mostly because I thought it would be funny if there were such a thing as, say, tetralygomy. Perhaps hexalygomy... Do they exist? I'm not sure. I think they might. I'm glad Mello's not into polygomy. I'm also not a fan of Halle, but I enjoy the fact that Matt is shorter than her. I also love everything else. I look forward to hearing more from the coffee machine,

Axcent

(but you knew that already, because it's written in front of the review.)
Axcent chapter 4 . 12/9/2010
I... Am dropping you and your fabulous story a review. Finally. Heh. It is fantastic, really. I've just neglected to slip it into favourites yet. I was constantly worrying over the word "monolygamy mostly because I thought it would be funny if there were such a thing as, say, tetralygomy. Perhaps hexalygomy... Do they exist? I'm not sure. I think they might. I'm glad Mello's not into polygomy. I'm also not a fan of Halle, but I enjoy the fact that Matt is shorter than her. I also love everything else. I look forward to hearing more from the coffee machine,

Axcent

(but you knew that already, because it's written in front of the review.)
smilingrightnow7 chapter 4 . 12/9/2010
Excellent!

Don't worry you don't have to reply to my review,I'll definately still be reading this :))
NyamePurple chapter 4 . 12/9/2010
I really like how this is going. Can't wait for more. And don't say it's shitty. I find it well written and the action is nicely developed.

Update soon!
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