Reviews for The Enemy Within
Red Tornado chapter 6 . 12/3/2010
I'm not sure i like this a fan of Power Rangers that get magic-gizmo of some sort...

But as least she is she is PISSED.
Red Tornado chapter 5 . 12/3/2010
Is a incredible chapter, is fighting against earthlings...i'm feeling more proud than i probably should...

The last scene was nice to break the tension.
Ghostwriter chapter 7 . 11/27/2010
Whoa. Awesome. Great stuff. More soon please. Catch ya on the flip side.
I HAVE NO NAME chapter 7 . 11/27/2010
Please updae soon! Please!
Loken chapter 1 . 11/27/2010
I really like this. Who hs the device?
I HAVE NO NAME chapter 4 . 11/27/2010
Very good. Add a lemon.
milordo-z 2.0 chapter 7 . 11/22/2010
Ghostwriter chapter 6 . 11/19/2010
Wow. I love it. More soon please. Catch ya on the flip side.
Ghostwriter chapter 5 . 11/13/2010
Ha ha ha! GO Mike! Awesome job. Catch ya on the flip side.
Red Tornado chapter 4 . 11/11/2010
Aurico died?He died?Talk about spoiler...

Cole is getting a bad reputation even across the galaxy.

If you want to put a lemon,it's okay with me. is least Kendrix will have all the night to "console" him.
Red Tornado chapter 3 . 11/11/2010
Apparently,surviving a nearly death is more offending that least,the two seem to resolve the problems.

Of course,the humor/romance is always a good thing.

What happened to Maya?
the true elec chapter 4 . 11/10/2010
I like this start, looking forward to more of it. I don't want this to become a lemon.
Red Tornado chapter 2 . 11/10/2010
He got home just to discover that hell broke loose,kinda like Batman in "The brave and the bold".

I love Leo in this gives a totally new definition to "Badass!".

Keep up the good work.
Red Tornado chapter 1 . 11/10/2010
What a way to start a story.I wonder if the device was found by humans or aliens...

You know,Americans,just because that worked with Indians,doesn't mean it will eƬwork here.
Ghostwriter chapter 4 . 11/10/2010
Aw, we lost Maya. Sad. But great drama. Awesome job. Love it. Catch ya on the flip side.
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