Reviews for Perfect Snowflake
no one chapter 1 . 12/19/2013
you need to do some revisions. clarification mostly and you need to use more indentation.
Most of all you need to learn to use periods. - like that
uh chapter 1 . 11/26/2013
work on that sentence structure
ethan.lukkar chapter 1 . 10/6/2013
Magnificent chapter can't wait for more please update soon
shadow chapter 1 . 9/18/2013
Gah! I'm freaking crying from this story , not bcuz of lemony scenes, but the fact that u can feel the love of mizore towards tsukune, you've gotta make sequels
Freekness chapter 1 . 2/2/2013
that was interesting and unexspected. When i read the review i thoight it was going to go in a diferent direction. But this was really good!
the stranger chapter 1 . 11/24/2012
that was an astonishing story. not too long and not too short. i want to say that this story was superbly made. fantastic job.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/24/2012
I didn't much like it it was to short and you could have explained what she looked like
Andrew stead chapter 1 . 11/14/2012
Best fan fiction ever and I've read a lot
Tabuu99 chapter 1 . 10/23/2012
I love it.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/7/2012
It was good, try and make the sentences flow together and not jump around all over the place, also it seems your fingers weren't typing as fast as you were thinking because there were a lot of spots that were missing things,
Lost Guy chapter 1 . 9/18/2012
woh... talk about erotic. could i ask for a sequal?
Guest chapter 1 . 5/8/2012
one thing a hateful comment no no not against you buuuuut to I think 3 people okay they shouldn't relate it to the Kurumu one because you may not (of course I dont know) like kurumu I somewhat do and #3 is the punuation nerd I think I spelled punctuation wrong not that time but I mean damn who cares he/she COULD read it. NOW TIME FOR THE GOODA NEWS wich you oh so deserve this deserves some ''Rock N Roll'' by ''SKRILLEX'' YEAH (I LIKE CAPITAL LETTERS) but finally not a blood suckin' bitch story or one about a sluty cow speakin' of (Moka) My hypothesis ha stupid word is Moka only loves the poor Tsukune for his blood message to Moka ''FUCK YOU''
The Unknown Twinkie chapter 1 . 4/5/2011
This is really great
GTV2005 chapter 1 . 3/2/2011
OH HELL YEA! thats how rosario should end, with TsukunexMizore. :)
Escaped Mental Author chapter 1 . 1/21/2011
This is a really great fanfiction using my favorite pairing in the entire series thanks
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