|Reviews for Why you can't date McGarden|
| HeirToTheShadows chapter 1 . 8/5/2012
I love this fic! It's wonderful!
Lol, xD, Elfman in gym shorts...
| night element chapter 1 . 3/21/2012
NOOOOO! why did you have to let us imagine elfman - in all his burly bulking manliness in Physical Education shorts? now, my mind's in turmoil!
and wow... i never noticed max or warren until i read this fic. lol. he doesn't stand a chance in the first place.
oooppsss... i'm imagining i hiro mashima will try another movie involving a school type plot? and now there's rogue cheney from saber tooth. and i think it'll be a good plot for a high school story. oh lol~!
| youxcan'txstop chapter 1 . 7/27/2011
Max is an idiot, in just about everyones stories :P
lol, this was very cute, and Gazille with a motorcycle...very sexy
| Sylmarien chapter 1 . 7/6/2011
lol that last line about elfman has me rolfing. that is not an image anyone wants to have except maybe evergreen XD
| Ice of the Kitsune's Fire chapter 1 . 6/28/2011
The mental image of Elfman in shorts has corrupted me forever. FOREVER, I SAY! FOREEVVVEERRRR-
-but on the actual story, it was very cute, and I enjoyed it. Adorable!
| Ryuketsu no Hana chapter 1 . 1/28/2011
jajajajaja me encanto jjajajaja XD
| DevilishBea chapter 1 . 1/11/2011
Nice... Specially elfman in gym shorts
| crownbutt123 chapter 1 . 11/13/2010
Haha Nice Oneshot!
With your writing skills, maybe a long fanfic will work just fine!
Elfman in gym shorts. Levy and Gazille(my fav coup). Everythings imaginable, pfft...in funny ways too! LMAO
| winterkaguya chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
Hahhahahaa...I like this one too! Short, sweet and funny! I just adore Levy and Gazille/Gajeel! They look so good together. But do you notice how Gazille reminded me of Vegeta from Dragonball and how Levy looks like Bulma (the blueish hair thing?).
I like the last part. That was simply priceless. I'm sure Gazille has to be the most jealous-attentive man in Fairy Tail. Not even Natsu come close...
Elfman? Perhaps you might want all of us to die of perpetual laughter! Anyways, keep up the good work!
| the TumTum tree chapter 1 . 10/28/2010
You know, this is pretty good, but I can't help thinking that the few fanfiction writers who choose to write about Levy kind of underestimate her. The whole of Fairy Tail are delinquents, Levy included. I don't think she's as sheltered as she's made out to be... What I mean is, I don't think its that shocking that she'd end up with a person like Gazille.
| ihateanime chapter 1 . 10/27/2010
Dang, that was too funny!
Oh max. You clueless idiot xD
anyway, good job!
Keep on writing fairy tail fics, you're really good!(:
| rurokun chapter 1 . 10/26/2010
yup. this is fkin hilarious. and genius. period. XD loved it!
| ice queen chapter 1 . 10/25/2010
Poor Max! He was just lookin' for lovin! *snickers* cute_ And honestly, Elfman might be a dork but gym shorts isn't that bad a look on him! *thought he looked pretty hot on the ship heading for the island, herself*
| Windraider chapter 1 . 10/25/2010
Dude the begining was long winded but the party was so exciting and funny.
I could so easily see it all happening.
But seriously, you should change the paring from Gajeel and Max to Gajeel and Levy.
I mean I misunderstood the pairing at the beginning, I think more plp would read if u do so.
| Reading-in-the-Corner chapter 1 . 10/25/2010
that was brillaint.
poor Max. but the characters were fantastic!
i luved it when Gageel entered the scene xD MARVELOUS!
seriously fabulous writing!