Reviews for At Your Service |
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tamwhit chapter 1 . 1/23/2017 Please continue |
gabby1017 chapter 1 . 8/15/2012 You introduce your character quite well... who they are... how they are... |
Catiedidit chapter 1 . 7/13/2012 Well hell! Great start! I really hope you continue with this. Its a great premise, and I look forward to some role reversal. |
betty69blue chapter 1 . 1/22/2012 Update please this sounds really cool! |
TwiTudorPlumAusten Reader chapter 1 . 1/28/2011 I think this could be a wonderful story! I really hope you keep up with it! |
aimCULLENee chapter 1 . 11/19/2010 good story |
Madison Elliott chapter 1 . 11/13/2010 i loved this can't wait to read more |
Twilightisluv chapter 1 . 11/8/2010 OH MRS HOTTIE*WINKS* Rosie likes! but atlass iam sorry i cant bring my self to read the B and J *shudders* |
bellamarie1976 chapter 1 . 11/2/2010 I think you have a great start to a great story I hope you update it real soon! |
shayna.lane chapter 1 . 10/25/2010 poor edward I'm liking this story so far. I like that he isn't so perfect |
TSW-913 chapter 1 . 10/25/2010 I'm loving this story already! I can't wait to read more... |
belanded chapter 1 . 10/25/2010 I'll pass. Not the biggest fan of Edward will never get over his dead wife stories. I don't get them. They never work because Bella is always inferior to them and it is obvious he'll never truly love her. It is always Edward, Bella never has someone she truly loved before Edward. Seriously, couldn't the children have been hers that she had with a man she loved? I don't get the double standard that Bella can't love anyone besides Edward. Also, what is it with Kate? I barely remember her from the books. Isn't her power to shock vampires? If that is her power, then she wasn't a very good person during her life. I don't understand why she is such a why she is always Edwards love. Poor Carmen, God forbid Edward is with someone with Moorish blood. Oh, Mia Maestro. You are too talented for a glorified cameo. |