Reviews for Heartfelt Misconceptions
meggie.halloran chapter 20 . 10/9/2015
please update soon! i'm crying. this story is so wonderful. please!
Kawaii Senpai chapter 20 . 9/6/2015
This story is pretty amazing. The right amount of angst, kawaii, and smut to make a fulfilling tale. I feel myself connecting with these two all the way while I'm reading. Keep up the great work! You've come so far with this and I can't wait to see how it ends. :)
owlhero chapter 20 . 8/22/2015
The first scene was short but the words spoken showed a lot with Cody's anger and Carey's attempts at manipulation. I find it kind of funny Carey calling Cody selfish when she's been manipulating the situation to suit what she thinks is best.

Good job using Zack's old troublemaking skills here as well as a possible Sink or Swim reference as an orderly. Although he has come a long way from being disgusted from cleaning the garbage disposal system. Not exactly the most cleanly job out there. Having Steve does remind everything what the goal is but he's not really needed but I can see the reason for background depth here.

The therapy is a game of hide and seek trying to find out what's the truth of the soul. I like Cody's torn self. His own mind (or heart) trying to fight him. (Complicated yet it reads simple. lol) It makes for a good scene. The advanced forms of therapy do seem frightening, especially when I first come to electric shock therapy. But Carey seems to be pushing the therapist where he does not want to go.

I wonder how bad Zack's going to react when he finds out the new treatments?
owlhero chapter 19 . 8/15/2015
Welcome back to the madness...

I sort of feel sorry for Amber in some ways but I still think she's a horrible person for being involved in this. Her mental thoughts prove to be a great story refresher. The way you wrote her or Carey's plan gives it a illusion of simplicity. Carey's initial motivation from Amber's POV looks sympathetic but how you write internal collapsing was great.

The scene jumping allows the sense of time to move faster. I guess with everything that happened before, there would be weirdness between Zack and Theo. I feel bad for Zack with how suddenly Cody has appeared to change in such in a short amount of time but allowing us to see Cody's confusion makes it worse. Of course the troublemaker would not let that stop him.

The family pow-wow was needed if only to figure what's going on. I guess I can maybe understand Maureen's reasoning in regards to Carey considering she is a mother but it seems a little too simple for me. Very little grey area with her.

Amber's explanation does leave Carey with a little wiggle room for her actions with societal beliefs but how far Carey went with this is unfortunate. I love Amber version of a twisted Carey here.
Guest chapter 20 . 8/3/2015
Welcome back. Glad you're planning on finishing the story. I was wondering how it would end.
Guest chapter 18 . 6/3/2014
I really am enjoying your fic, I hope you don't quit doing this.
Jrf1970 chapter 13 . 5/13/2014
She is a bitch having a bastud do her dirty work
ivelisse21 chapter 18 . 1/28/2014
can you update please thank you
KC chapter 18 . 1/22/2014
Please Continue
winglessheartscan'tfly chapter 18 . 12/22/2013
ok so who found them!? i have been waiting soooooooooooooooooooooo long for this to be updated :D glad to see some sanity returning to the wrld of the martins and i can only guess that it was either carey or theo that caught them ... am i right? will it be the true end of the martins involvement with carey or will theo be the one to bring their world crashing down? or someone else entirely? i need to know ... i love this story dearly and want to see you bring it to fruitition ... if you dont get past youre writiers block soon or would just like some advice from a fellow twincest martin-style author feel free to pm me or read my twincest Truth is Sometimes Hard to Swallow much loves well wishes and eager anticipation, Len aka winglessheart
Layla chapter 18 . 11/8/2013
I like this story, I really do but can you just finish this already? It's been two years and I'm afraid you're just going to post another few chapters then ditch this story again. I get the whole writers block thing but realistically I'm pretty sure not many people have reviewed simply because they think you're just gonna abandon this again. It's been ages, this story just needs to finish, I-and many others want closure. Both Zack and Cody need to just leave and move in a house together in like, another country and not tell anyone where they're going. Although this is your story. It's been a month already since you last updated. Have you just left they again? Or is it the lack of reviews? I don't mean to be rude-but I just want to read the ending. I need closure.
Guest chapter 18 . 11/6/2013
Please update soon
owlhero chapter 18 . 10/15/2013
Long time no see...
I love Zack's desperation and pain here by wearing himself out by traveling the country. the little details like the bedding add to the scene.
Well, well after reading the last chapter, I have to wonder if Carey had something to do with the letter.
Zack's always determined when he puts his mind to something.
I really the tactic used by the therapist. It allowed the readers to see inside Cody's makes sense the feelings were gradual and not sudden since they were around each other all the time. But Cody's still in control. I found it funny that he stumped the professional.
You have to wonder how much of the pain is from himself or from what other people keep telling him its wrong. Since they believe he just misinterpreted their relationship. I mean the moving, their parents' divorce, its possible.

For some reason, I keep thinking parents can be manipulative if they dont mean to be.

I cant blame Cody for thinking it was a dream because with his mother influencing everything, it could have been. Especially when you went through it like a dream using only sensations and feelings, not his eyes or mention any clothing. Then again they are beyond having to worry about what each other wear. They only see inside their souls.

Oh boy, here comes the explosion. especially if its Carey killing the romance. It would be funny if it was Theo.
Junjoulove chapter 18 . 10/14/2013
Wow I actually l
Junjoulove chapter 17 . 10/13/2013
Soo.. It's been awhile since you updated.. I don't know if you're still going to continue this but, it'd be great if you could at least just finish it in the next chapter.. A happy ending you know.. It'd be great. I just, really like this story and it hasn't even updated in a while an that kinda makes me wonder if you're going to finish it. But please do! xxxxxxxx
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