|Reviews for Reasons to Hate Hawaii|
| Gratia Astra chapter 1 . 1/14
I have to say it. As a general review, I don't think a couple of lists make a good story, or even a drabble really. It was interesting to see how you wrote Danno's thoughts though. But what really caught me was the second-to-last reason for him to stay in Hawaii anyway.
"McGarrett might hang him over a building if her tries to leave (and Danny might actually be disappointed if he didn't)"
That one sentence just jumped out at me and I loved it so much I had to favorite the entire thing. Because, in my opinion, that just sums up a whole hell lot of their relationship right there (while still leaving a couple volcano's worth of stuff unsaid).
| Miaou chapter 1 . 1/13
I like this. You make my night be a smiling one, so thank you.
Why there is nothing about Kamekona and the shrink strange mix?
I wonder what Steve would do if he finds one list. Do you think he'd comment it or make his owns then asks Danno and drives him crazy?
| Hoganfan chapter 1 . 8/20/2012
Dear Faye Dartmouth:
Not bad. I could see Danno thinking these things or keeping such a list, if only in his head. I think you missed a couple of things though.
Thing to like about Hawaii: A co-worker who looks good in a bikini (Kono)
Thing to hate about Hawaii: A co-worker who would take extreme exception to you taking a good look at the co-worker who looks good in the bikini (Chin)
| HesMines chapter 1 . 1/10/2012
I think this might be my favourite line...
-McGarrett might hang him over a building if he tries to leave (and Danny might actually be disappointed if he didn't)
Loved it! :D
| Belker chapter 1 . 10/15/2011
I loved Danny's lists and all they entailed, but the simplest one made me laugh the hardest - Steve McGarrett's idea of backup (because what the hell?)
| MaraudingSnitch1314 chapter 1 . 4/14/2011
Absolutely wonderful! I love that Danny's lists were ridiculously hilarious and sweetly fluffy. Plus, you kept him perfectly in-character. Great work!
| Qweb chapter 1 . 4/6/2011
I keep rereading this story because I love it so.
| vampyfreak chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
| Runner043 chapter 1 . 3/26/2011
Just checking out some H 5-0 stories and read your story. Very funny!
| star trek nutcase chapter 1 . 2/19/2011
Interesting and appealing, and when I finished I had a sappy smile on my face - luckily I was alone!
| Ms.HellFire-ffacnt chapter 1 . 12/15/2010
'McGarrett might hang him over a building if he tries to leave (and Danny might actually be disappointed if he didn't)' - You know, I'd actually like to see that. Hawaii's definitely not Philly, but there is certainly plently of brotherly love.
| francis2 chapter 1 . 11/25/2010
This is so the Danno we know and love.
| tmvg chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
amazing! loved it (: very well done.
| Lucky4Track chapter 1 . 11/2/2010
Haha aww this made me smile. And I think you did capture Danny's voice pretty well. Lovely work :)
| godzillagirl16 chapter 1 . 11/2/2010
LOL! I love it. You seem to have gotten the new Danny Williams' voice just right. I hope you'll do more like this, maybe one from each of the others?
Thanks for the fun read.