|Reviews for Spring Cleaning|
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/30/2014
Thought it was decently writen i see talent your editing needs work some gramaticul errors but well written would like to see more of your work
| AlexanderMugetsu chapter 1 . 2/21/2014
And the characters don't feel OCC at all.
| COBRASTEVE chapter 1 . 1/9/2014
OMG, your sequel, I hope should have Skuld's reaction. Great one shot.
| Can I have more chapter 1 . 11/5/2013
Very natural progression. Usually one shots feel contrived but you overcame that well. I do wish that there was a little more detail tothe build up & foreplay, but I'm far from dissatisfied. Looking forward to "one with a plot".
| Larkawolfgirl chapter 1 . 9/14/2013
I really love your line "turn the room into such a paradise that the bacteria fled in terror." That is pure brilliance! I didn't think this was that OOC at all. Well maybe the fact that Belldandy looked at the covers and a bit of the contents of the magazines without knowing what they implied but then as soon as Urd showed a full nude shot she understood. If she was knowledgeable to figure it out after seeing the full nude shot I would think she could have figured it out a little sooner. That is the only problem I find with this. Too bad that when Skuld comes back they will be pretty much how they were before again. Stupid annoying Skuld.
| Gamera68 chapter 1 . 3/6/2013
Short and to the point.
One of the best O!MG Lemons, ever :D
Would LOVE to see a sequel...hint hint.
| Fire Bird 2 chapter 1 . 1/30/2013
When you know who comes home he is so dead.
| GoodLucifer chapter 1 . 1/22/2013
Wonderful story of excellent pair!
| Reviews Nazi chapter 1 . 1/21/2013
No reviews for you!
| Lyndel chapter 1 . 12/19/2012
Belldandy is cute. :) HAHAHAHA
| anonymous chapter 1 . 8/8/2012
I LOVE IT!1!
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/27/2012
| vanilla chapter 1 . 4/5/2012
That was really good. It's interesting and made me want to watch it too, ;)
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/28/2012
there screwed when skuld comes home
| Unknown Flamer chapter 1 . 11/11/2011
Very good story, very enjoyable if a little hurried towards the end. However, given the sexual tension building up between them, I could see it happening like this.