Reviews for If things had been different
lizzyance chapter 1 . 10/9/2015
Awww. They're so cute!
Puppylover4442 chapter 9 . 9/17/2015
I do believe that Jace's last name is Herondale, right?
Izzy Lightwood chapter 9 . 4/27/2015
I love this so much...thx for writing it... :)
Dean'sGirl'67Impala chapter 9 . 2/1/2015
Hi! Ok so I think you could take this story in a direction similar to the book with the whole save the world from disaster thing. Make clary be like 15 or 16 and jace 17 or 18 and make Sebastian turn evil. Make it seem like he was getting close to clary, jace, Alec, izzy, and Magnus to get to know their weaknesses so he can figure out a way to defeat them. Sebastian does have demon blood in him after all making him evil. That's just my opinion and you in no way need to follow my suggestions
-Hannah (but not the other Hannah that you mentioned in previous authors notes)
Dean'sGirl'67Impala chapter 7 . 2/1/2015
Well for starters, isn't sebastian supposed to be evil? But besides that this story is amazing and completely 100% adorable and I just can't even begin to express how amazing of a writer you are and how amazing this story is. Please continue to update and be, well, amazing!
Dean'sGirl'67Impala chapter 1 . 2/1/2015
Oh my god so cute
FelicityQueen23 chapter 9 . 8/24/2014
CloveLudwig99 chapter 1 . 1/18/2014
This really good! I just have one question, Is Clary Valentine's or Luke's? Great story so far!
imstillthinkin chapter 9 . 6/22/2013
heyyy, where'd you go i miss you so, seems like forever that you've been gone... :)

dewikaka chapter 6 . 3/6/2013
'she wiggled and then sat down on Jace heavily and he made a kind of strangled sound, but it was kind of muffled as if he didn't want us to know she had hurt him' LMFAO oooooohhh...Jaceeey what were you doing...little innocent precious
dewikaka chapter 1 . 3/6/2013 cute...too cute
Harry-Four-Dimitri-Jace.Lover chapter 2 . 2/17/2013
Awww, such a gentlemen Jace. It was so cute...Again. (P.s:I am in love with this story)
Harry-Four-Dimitri-Jace.Lover chapter 1 . 2/17/2013
Oh my ! Baby Jace is sooo cute and sweet. I love it even i am on the first chapter :)
Guest chapter 2 . 1/9/2013
Alright, I was getting into this story and would probably have read it completely through. I hope you don't mind a bit of constructive criticism...the a/n in the middle of the chapter drives me insane! I hate leaving negative feedback because I know it's hard to put your stuff out there, and your stuff seems pretty good, so don't let me discourage you. Maybe I'm the only one with that specific pet peeve.
books22 chapter 1 . 12/15/2012
Isn't Jace like a year older than Clary? Other than that the story is great.
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