|Reviews for Kyara of Fortree|
| Mattie Scary chapter 5 . 11/2/2010
it looks really good to me.
| dfaye chapter 5 . 10/26/2010
Hey! I guess i'm the first huh? Okay, I like the way you started your story it is really different from most since they all begin with the obvious starting towns. The main thing I think you could improve on is your paragraphing. Some are seriously too long. It would be easier for people to read if the paragraphs were shorter. Anyway I'll keep an eye out on your story for awhile to see where it goes( Please update!