|Reviews for Meet The Parent|
| Amles80 chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
Hm... "So. Considering I wrote this at 6am, with no sleep all night, is it any good?"
Yes, it is good! The Angela characterisation is good, but what I'm feeling is that the story is very short, perhaps too short. It makes me want something more! I can believe that it really happened like this, but maybe a little more thoughts/emotions/reactions would be good.
Also, you might want to edit this a bit. Angela says she's Nathan's father...
I'm happy you wrote it, too few people have written anything with Angela in a good way!
| MirandaMinerva chapter 1 . 5/21/2011
Oh, wow. You have Angela perfectly. The 'tight smile' , direct manner, and evaluative looks.