Reviews for Building Bridges |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I'm a bit late to this party, but I'm really enjoying this story and desperately hoping you haven't forgotten it. It's really heavy, but familiar to me (in a slightly removed and very abstract sense) and cute in a highly atypical way. There's a bit that struck me later on after continuing past the scene where Harry first asks McGonagall about Sirius. The reference to blood being thicker than water is very fitting here on multiple levels. The phrase is only ever incomplete anymore, and so it's used incorrectly. The full phrase is "the blood of the covenant is thicker than the water of the womb." I don't know what you know, but this use was quite apt for the context of the story. Harry functions under the values of the original meaning, while McGonagall only really seems to understand the current use. Harry cutting short the line of discussion makes it very clear. I don't know if this was intentional, but I really appreciated seeing the contrast presented in such a way. I hope life allows you time for rest, and time to be able to write. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderfully written, terrific story - intriguing, fun, and so interesting. I hope to see more of it! You are weaving a story that will definitely be bookmarked for future rereads! Questions - what is the significance of the last number on Harry's wrist? Was that just the number of kids he had branded at that time? Will he ever really, deeply trust a deserving adult? Is Harry the Savior and not Lacius? I was wondering because you , in an author note, said that Lacius was the proclaimed hero, and I didn't know how to interpret that. What is Harry's knife in the abdomen pain - and when did it happen and why? I know it was a gang type thing, but at what age? Does the pain he has have anything to do with where his magical core is? Why does it pain him when around ultimate evil? Was he hit with the killing curse? Does he have also Soul Leach? Does Lacius? Will Harry get better and have a good life? Does his family have a Wizengamot seat? Does your universe have Lordships? Just wanting something to hang over Malfoy's head... I know real' life can really take away from the really important work of fanfic writing... I hope that you can continue on with this story, even though it has been nearly ten months. I have really enjoyed it. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wondering why Moody expected something different in Harry. Why did he go in expecting someone dark? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why did Harry stand up in front of Lacius at the end of Care? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wondered about Harry and not having a scar. Your description said that Lacius was proclaimed the hero, but you didn't say he WAS the hero of that night. So Harry's scar is on his abdomen? Does that mean he has the Soul Leach? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another - let's see how much we can dump on poor Harry fic...oh, but well written, intriguing, and has a pull of great interest. ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gotta wonder if your version of goblin kind originated somewhere in the Orient...Japan, perhaps? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story and hope you update it again |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh boy, this is probably one of my favorite hp fanfics. I love your harry and I feel so sorry for him! I'm so thankful that he found a family! I'm so happy that he finally knows Remus |
![]() ![]() 'I was loved once. I know that. Something terrible happened. It wasn't their fault.' This was so sad and wholesome at the same time. Great first chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is excellent I was going to review at the end of chapter 2 but didn’t want to stop Thank you |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you so much for such a riveting story. I am thoroughly enjoying your spin on this world. Keep up the good work |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hope you continue with this. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely love this story. I keep coming back to it and rereading it with much fondness. I hope to see more chapters in the future and I hope that RL doesn't cause too much trouble with your creative process. Keep up the absolutely phenomenal work! - |