Reviews for Building Bridges |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is a really interesting story... I am quite looking forward to its continuation! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Imagine a stool with a single leg. How does it stay up? It's slight tilt seems to defy gravity as you move towards it. But wait. The explanation is simple. The end of the leg grows into a crosspiece that distributes the weight evenly. You sit down. The chair crumbles under you and you fall with a thump onto a cushion of wood-chips. You laugh, because you find it funny. It did not seem old. Perhaps it was a prank? |
![]() ![]() I adore this fic :D please update as I want to know what is going to happen and who Harry will end up loving (please not Ginny-strongly dislike her) |
![]() ![]() ![]() can't wait to hear more! keep writing, ~Cayti Leigh |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this Harry... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very interesting story. Nice and original. I hope Harry survives the detention with Snape-no panic attacks like going over the lake (good scene, that one). I have a vivid picture of Harry's hands shaking as he looks at the notes from the orphanage. You did a good job on the ache in his heart, the longing. Looking forward to more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() such a great story! your english is excellent for a non-native speaker. i will look forward to seeing this continued! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, now I'm REALLY interested. I like Snape, most of the time, and I really like your pertrayal of him. |
![]() ![]() ![]() 5am. Tired. Awesome story. More later. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Harry's desicion that reading and writing weren't much use is coming back to bit him now, isn't it? How he thought that he'd be able to protect and/or provide for his friends without decent reading/writing skills I don't know. How can you protect someone if you can't read the warning to acess the danger something poses? How can you be sure they'll be taken care of when you're indisposed if you can't write well enough to leave clear instructions? He really didn't think this through, did he? And what's with the red ink? Is that even allowed? |
![]() ![]() ![]() A wonderful chapter- even though I hoped that Harry and Serverus could have at least a nice truce... Why are Hannah Susan not part of Harry's friends in one of the sentences? "(Hannah and Susan weren't part of their group, but they were the ones talking to Harry in regular class)"- or do you mean just not part of that group? |
![]() ![]() ![]() amazing chapter! i loved the interaction between harry and snape and i cannot wait to read more. keep up the great work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() thank you for the update, i love getting updates on my birthday. i liked the fact that harry refuses to go to binns class and cant wait to see what will happen in detention |