Hmm I thought we'd see Lacious(SP?) in this chapter but we did see Neville, Alice and Cedric so it's alright! PLease UPdate soon, I wanna see Harry get overwhelmed by people!

Very nice story! your harry is simply enchanting!

I skip so much text because of the bazillions of OC characters with their special nick names you focus on. Characters the reader can't connect to so he doesn't care.

You need to focus on the key characters, in this case Harry, perhaps also his friend at the orphanage and then his goblin friend. Spending any time on the others feels like spam.

good chapter, sad to see him leave the orphane but nice to see him go to Hogwarts!

Wait- to Alice and Frank Longbottom didn't go crazy? It's too bad that Char isn't magical as well!

excellent work so far! the "aww" moments were just done perfectly without it seeming icky,fake and/forced! continue to do good work!

very nice story! the low number of reviews confuses me to be frank...

Just wanted to say I really like this story.

D'awww... Nice story.

great chapter!

keep up the great work!

I truly apologise I misqoted your work I did mean Finding Parental care all other sentiments stand Melethril you are a very taeted athor and one of my faves as well as alerts.

So sorry

Gustavia xx

This is just as good as Perception is Everything, different but just as readable.

I adore the plot-line and your Goblins seem very real, by that I mean three dimentionl and not just line-fillers.

I admire your talent and love seeing e-mail wih your name as the Author Alert.

Thank you for sharing your time and your work.

, you were correct in the time zone

2. A wonderful story! Is there a reason that Harry can't see (Maybe I misread?)? I really liked it (and Hagrid seems really, really nice here!)

" Show , don't tell "

You missed that Golden Rule of story writing with your A/N

"- Harry is the BWL (there will be changes to canon, though"

I think it will be best if from now on you will reveal plot elements in the story , not in the notes.

On to the review of this story :

The writing is solid , no obvious mistakes .

You portrayed the character emotions really well and their personality is very well defined.

A great story so far , I wish you luck and hope you will keep the good update rate.

This chapter was so adorable! I love love loved it! Might be one of my favorite chapters, plus it's my favorite number, that never hurts anything. :D

Next chapter should get interesting. I don't think Harry will like what's his name that starts wiht an 'L' but isn't 'L'? Although I can see him getting along wiht Neville. I bet he, Neville and Hermione (she doesn't go to Ron's group because really she liked Neville and Harry more as people to begin with and after Harry's insistance she liked Ron so she wouldn't go with his group) make the silver trio while Lacious (?), Ron and the girl makes the golden trio. I can see it happening but that's just me.

Please please please UPdate soon!

Plea