this is going great youre doing great please continue. i usually steer clear of first year fics because it takes so long, but im really interested in a genuine hufflepuff, caring harry that doesnt have any expectations. the longbottom scion really is lucky here because he has his parents; him flounting his shit really isnt doing him any favors. children are really fickle that way

oh that is a new avenue for this trope we'll see

I enjoyed this start. You write well!

Removing reviews?
How leftist of you.

To świetna,oryginalna historia z niezwykle emocjonalnym tłem. Szkoda,że jej niedokończyłeś. Gratuluję jednak talentu i dziękuję za przyjemność,jaką dało mi przeczytanie tej opowieści. Pozdrawiam.

Rowling is based as fuck

Transphobia? Damn just say you hate women and girls instead. Misogyny at its finest.

This was great.
Hope ur doing well and living ur best life.

p/this-never-happens

Also, Hannah's surname is spelled as "Abbott", not "Abott"...

Really hope you come back to this fic at some point, it is very interesting...

Just out of curiosity, where did you come up with Lacius as a name?

I love it, reading on...

I'm not convinced that Lacius really is the BWL, there were three children in that nursery...

This is a very interesting fic, such a shame that you've let a difference of opinions keep you from finishing it...