Reviews for Force Maelstrom
trex0428 chapter 7 . 4/14
Srsly i wish you didnt hype up naruto that much i mean especially if he was from the naruT
trex0428 chapter 5 . 4/14
Man this would be much better if naruto was born in earthland
Shury-ken chapter 1 . 10/8/2017
Fuck... don't read this fic. I was thoroughly disappointed at the end. Fucking partial endings...
Guest chapter 2 . 4/23/2017
fucking die shit fic don't read worst fic ive read in a while
Lerris chapter 1 . 10/18/2016
Levy was an interesting choice. Naruto without chakra, is, well, not really Naruto anymore. Still, it might work. A Naruto who just destroys someone else's home because he was ordered to is definitely not Naruto.
surc chapter 16 . 9/18/2016
it was a good story, but I'm disappointed that you dropped it
surc chapter 15 . 9/18/2016
omg do you not understand that people do not say wtf and omg in dialog
surc chapter 5 . 9/15/2016
Jared51 chapter 4 . 7/25/2016
You fucking piece of shit, naruto would never lose to natsu and never do anything bad.
NightFury109 chapter 14 . 2/24/2016
Was on the fav boat until I saw you were doing a harem...
Kanathia chapter 1 . 2/10/2016
I am by no means a master of commas. They still flummox me to this day, but you certainly need beating help. I couldn't even make it through two paragraphs before that was abundantly clear. I'm not trying to be mean but your abundant comma use is highly distracting.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/19/2016
He doesn't cause he cant fucking survive without chakra you ignorant fuck. Well why don't you write a superman story with a super man with no powers. Or a super saiyan goku story with no saiyan power's or the flash fan fic with him having no speed.
scaryorange chapter 7 . 1/1/2016
Brah, where is his magic at?!
Squarekiddo chapter 8 . 10/21/2015
Damn, thats a shame I truly was enjoying this story!
I really was, but as soon as that Memories take/place thing came up it was a major off switch for me, couldnt even be bothered to read this whole chapter after that bullshit, totally killed the whole thing for me.
Guest chapter 16 . 6/25/2015
Noooooo! Why must you end it! Please come back to us author-sama!
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