Reviews for Force Maelstrom
Lerris chapter 1 . 10/18
Levy was an interesting choice. Naruto without chakra, is, well, not really Naruto anymore. Still, it might work. A Naruto who just destroys someone else's home because he was ordered to is definitely not Naruto.
surc chapter 16 . 9/18
it was a good story, but I'm disappointed that you dropped it
surc chapter 15 . 9/18
omg do you not understand that people do not say wtf and omg in dialog
surc chapter 5 . 9/15
WHO THE FUCK SAYS OMG ARGHHH *TRIGGERED*
Jared51 chapter 4 . 7/25
You fucking piece of shit, naruto would never lose to natsu and never do anything bad.
NightFury109 chapter 14 . 2/24
Was on the fav boat until I saw you were doing a harem...
Kanathia chapter 1 . 2/10
I am by no means a master of commas. They still flummox me to this day, but you certainly need beating help. I couldn't even make it through two paragraphs before that was abundantly clear. I'm not trying to be mean but your abundant comma use is highly distracting.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/19
He doesn't cause he cant fucking survive without chakra you ignorant fuck. Well why don't you write a superman story with a super man with no powers. Or a super saiyan goku story with no saiyan power's or the flash fan fic with him having no speed.
scaryorange chapter 7 . 1/1
Brah, where is his magic at?!
Squarekiddo chapter 8 . 10/21/2015
Damn, thats a shame I truly was enjoying this story!
I really was, but as soon as that Memories take/place thing came up it was a major off switch for me, couldnt even be bothered to read this whole chapter after that bullshit, totally killed the whole thing for me.
Guest chapter 16 . 6/25/2015
Noooooo! Why must you end it! Please come back to us author-sama!
ironboy32 chapter 16 . 6/18/2015
Goddamit man u can't just leave us with a cliffhanger! Get your ass back here and finish it!
Sigh chapter 8 . 5/27/2015
Get a proofreader...so many incorrect words being used in sentences.
YesOrYes chapter 7 . 1/2/2015
Naruto would not let Laxus beat him up, yes Jet and Droy can, but he'd probably attack Laxus back, since he was never in the Phantom-FT War anyway.
YesOrYes chapter 5 . 1/2/2015
I was raging on how Natsu defeated Naruto, and then I remembered he lost his major powers. Ugh... and that power of friendship crap.
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