|Reviews for Things That Burn|
| RukiaSanzo chapter 14 . 8/17/2015
Thanks for the story.
| Kris chapter 14 . 11/7/2014
I don't know, this story is weird somehow. For one where's Mycroft? He would be able to deal with that Finch person. I sort of missed him, he is constantly monitoring Sherlock, and you didn't add him in the story...
| Guest chapter 14 . 7/23/2014
if no more chapters are coming add complete to the story!
| Guest chapter 14 . 6/9/2014
The rest is coming?
| d1x1lady chapter 14 . 1/29/2014
Wow! Amazing story. Love it!
| lovegoods chapter 10 . 9/1/2013
The chapter title speaks for itself.
| lovegoods chapter 9 . 9/1/2013
I'm not crying or anything (yes i am)
| lovegoods chapter 7 . 9/1/2013
oh my god what
| lovegoods chapter 5 . 9/1/2013
Sherlock what are you doing.
| CosmicEssence chapter 14 . 8/6/2013
It seems we're finally getting somewhere with this chapter that isn't a mess or a cock up of contradictions or emotions...personally John demanding for his phone was a good turning point. Think Sherlock's asexual turning to sexual nature and all the ups and downs that's got to be causing a man like him (a self-proclaimed sociopath at that) was really well described and certainly comes across as someone whose whole way of life if changing and with no certainty as to the future. Finch, excellent OC and aside from whatever unknown personal vendetta she seems to have against Sherlock (her bitter comment about her daughter to John this chapter seemed to suggest as such) you've deffo made her a believable character. A few inconsistancies with John, in one chapter you have him passing his phone back and forth in his hands, while Sherlocks stlll got a hand n his on yet by this point John's mobile has already been missing a fair while (think it was either the sofa chapter or 1 after it). In the sofa chapter (as i'm calling it) you hint that John has done it before, or at least been bottomed before, plus the fact he's a doctor (surgeon first, GP second) who really shouldn't be so confused over what to do, what the prostate is or the fact Sherlock needs preparing so that whole bedroom scene just didn't read right. I do like you have him topping though.
Also where's Mycroft in all of this?
Overall though, I'm not all that keen on this one. Not sure I can even tell you why it just didn't inspire much of a reaction in me most of the time though there plenty of parts which were good for whatever reason. I dunno I just don't like it, sorry.
| Guest chapter 14 . 6/27/2013
asadkgasgdl;jajhd I hate Georgette Finch so much I'm about to strangle something... I'm so mad! I want to murder her so badly...
| Megabat chapter 14 . 5/12/2013
Amazing stuff. What can I say I am a sucker for John/Sherlock and for angst. I hope that one day you will return to this. But if you dont could you at least pop back and tell us where you saw it going and what you had planned out.
| KnoKnayme chapter 14 . 2/19/2013
Awwww that was sweet!
| estefani1509 chapter 10 . 12/9/2012
great story, very interesting
| Anya-Marie-537 chapter 14 . 12/7/2012
Really liked this, thought it really captured the characters well
I hope that eventually you keep updating it -