Reviews for Newton's Third Law
Guest chapter 52 . 5/2
Cool I’m in floods of tears
Pinkypi chapter 5 . 2/14
this is where it should've clicked for Iruka it's called rules for being a good shinobi family edition. xD
W.Eves chapter 45 . 12/12/2023
IM GENUINELY SO HAPPY U WENT WITH SASUKE BC! HE! IS! MY! ROOSTER! also it rlly just made sense to me yk? achi and kei always had a more familial feel with their relationship, kiba and kei felt too one sided ( the akamaru issue)— but sasuke has always been so /sure/ of kei, or yuki, back then, he also see that his feelings didn't change! ive been silently reading for now but i rlly just wanted to share haha
alsdjhfgljkwebgh chapter 20 . 8/29/2023
Oh, so this is slash? PUT THAT IN THE WARNING. You truly prove you are a brain dead idiot too stupid to be allowed to write.
alsdjhfgljkwebgh chapter 11 . 8/29/2023
This is retarded. Never write again, brain dead monkey. Retard.
dodger101 chapter 14 . 8/9/2023
uugghh i love all scenes in this story the only blight was the mean female teammate that i dont care who her name was. i really want to see her miserable and got a retribution. the way she treatead sweet baby kei was shitty and now she indirectly caused him injury. i hope she died
Child of Dreams chapter 18 . 6/19/2023
Neither, strawberry is the best!
Child of Dreams chapter 16 . 6/19/2023
Green jumpsuit
MoonlightMiracle.SakurianaHime chapter 35 . 12/25/2022
I hope that Kei ends up with either Makoto or Itachi or both of them.
realfan16 chapter 3 . 11/18/2022
huh Kakashi is great at this teaching thing? after teaching only chakra control and the art of lateness. that's confidence i wish i had lol
Pikachu79 chapter 52 . 9/4/2022
This is the sadest ending to the story. I had enjoyed the story but having Kei die and stay dead made me really sad, unless I am wrong about the story being finished.
Boom chapter 34 . 8/23/2022
This story is getting boring once you had Harry about to go to hogwarts. I think the story would be better if you time skipped the hogwarts part, have magic or potions fix his eye and cure his health. Then, give me the spells to cure Itachi (bcuz I just know you going have Itachi health and eyes go bad) hell you already following canon in a sense, it seems like your creativity is running out at this point so I’m a head out and stop reading. This story is too PG for me
Guest chapter 1 . 7/17/2022
Hello my name is lunaria Cosium I was wondering if you could give me permission to post this story with your name in my wattpad account on spanish and on English if you agree please let me now and the terms to follow to post this story
ironhair chapter 1 . 7/10/2022
ironhair chapter 52 . 7/10/2022
I don't understand where kei went after coming back to life.
Why is he still "dead"?
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