|Reviews for Moon Over Wands|
| Gundam Kaiser chapter 2 . 9/28/2012
This is a pretty amusing read. Any chance you'll pick it up again?
| Gundam Kaiser chapter 1 . 9/27/2012
Haven't seen a whole lot of Sailor Moon, but this is pretty amusing.
| Pensive Rumination Observer chapter 2 . 6/12/2011
... utterly bizare in a funny way. I kinda like it actually.
| Pensive Rumination Observer chapter 1 . 6/12/2011
WTF? In a good way...
| Tiamac7 chapter 1 . 2/12/2011
Glad to see that you reposted your old work. I had tried to reread them a while back but the websites vanished. Hope you're still planning to finish them. Cheers
| Juliet Ashton chapter 1 . 11/29/2010
DUDE...THAT WAS AWESOME! go self-inserts...
| addicted2text chapter 2 . 11/24/2010
Mina materialized at his elbow carrying a pair of leather tubes, Amy and Rae stood behind her. Jared took the leather tubes and began tying them, with Susan's help, on to Hermione's arms, like long shirtcuffs. "These are Bracers of Bardcraft. Bards are a type of wandering minstrel, a storyteller by trade and therefore *exactly* the sort of skill you need here."
So THAT's how you do it... ;)
| addicted2text chapter 1 . 11/24/2010
The magic energy washed over them all, the small circle huddled around Jared's still form. At first he shuddered from the blast, but then the unicorn seemed to melt and flow into him. His already white clothes shimmered and acquired the sheen of a unicorn's pelt. Fringe appeared at his cuffs and hem, matching the curling, white hair of a unicorn's mane, and the material of his belt seemed to take on the texture of woven unicorn tail.
I imagine we'll be seeing this as a plot point in the future...
| taxzombie chapter 1 . 11/6/2010
Let the over the top insanity commence! I love it.
My rule for reading your stuff is check your opinions of characters at the door, just go with the flow and you'll have a wild fun ride.
Works for me.
| Confer chapter 2 . 11/4/2010
Wow... Cool plot.
| dogbertcarroll chapter 2 . 11/4/2010
It was also NOT a lot of time to learn how to be a Hogwarts professor, even an assistant one standing in for the soon to be hired real one to replace the one they'd killed. It was a bit weird, too, reminding Jared of some brutal gladiator games he'd once heard about - kill the old champion to take his place, only in this case it was teachers. McGonagall assured him that it wasn't really like that and none of the students would be trying to kill him to get his job. But it was still an unpleasant comparison.
That would have changed the Canon HP series that's for sure. I may have to write a story where Harry is forced to teach because of that.
The eating books scene was hilarious.
"Yah... Eek!" Sailor Moon pivoted in fright, bringing her crystal wand up, as a ghost, the teacher of this class, floated through the wall behind her.
"LOVELY!" Was all Professor Binns was able to say before the impact of a nine-foot wide pink heart blasted him out of existence.
Everyone stood in silence for a long moment.
"That was our teacher, you know." Ron supplied helpfully, having been told in advance by his brothers this class was taught by a ghost.
I don't think anyone has written a funnier scene getting rid of Binns.
| dogbertcarroll chapter 1 . 11/4/2010
Loved how they were making plans for taking out trolls in groups.
You are running a complete nutter Dumbledore aren't you?
| ranma hibiki chapter 2 . 10/30/2010
out of everything so far, i think im actually more surprised that hermione hasnt been eating so many books that she looks like she is pregnant
now that would cause some gossip and some trouble for the scouts
| WhiteElfElder chapter 2 . 10/29/2010
They are just insane, that's it, insane.
| Swiss chapter 2 . 10/29/2010
"If you're expecting canon go to your local comic store, you won't find it here. If you demand professional standards then go to professionals and pay money for their work. If you require other creatures to live by your rules, buy an ant farm."
Definitely, definitely, your disclaimer is the best part...
But, that's not what dislaimers are for, actually. Disclamers are meant to be read by copyright law enforcers, not fans. Other sites like mediaminer and AFF would delete your story for not providing a proper disclaimer. Not sure this site applies the same rule yet, but it's only a question of time, as far as the Literate Union and their RedBootton Tool are concerned.
Literate Union is a group of users from this site seeking to clean it from stories that violate the rules, the obvious and not so obvious. "RedBootton" is a handy program that helps them detect such fanfics. Google them and find out on your own why your disclaimer makes you their potential victim.