Reviews for Kami's gift: A second chance
Reality check chapter 4 . 4/28/2016
There's only one problem with your story Naruto they come up with his ninja way until after the waves mission he didn't start using that saying into after that mission so that kind of flies in the face of story even if it's fanfic you want to have some basis for the actual fact it takes place after waves cause no one will take your story seriously so I don't want to hear fixing this affection that you want me to take you serious you want to make it least conceivable that it could have happened remember what a who taught him that you only become stronger when you have something truly worth protecting that is when he came up with that nindo double check what is precious he only started using that after the Michigan waves and I don't want to hear the excuse fanfiction chrisfix you can only go so far as to justify bad story writing but you still have sweet potential I'm just trying to point out to you so you makes it more believable you know that's what actual office actually doing right is he wants to be believable not crap even fiction look it up thank you and yes I don't know how to spell
Reality check chapter 2 . 4/28/2016
Only one problem it was Naruto's mother who had to Ramen an addiction and not his father just so you know she likes salt Ramen this reminder was brought to you by just kidding
NARUMOKA chapter 18 . 4/27/2016
finish this fanfic
Leonard chapter 12 . 1/26/2016
If your friends tell you about militaryelastic Naruto tell him to go jump in the lake whenever they talk to hokage they call him hokagesam or Lord Lord third any don't refer to the joining as commanded watch an episode of Naruto when he won learn how to properly declare the rank and name and don't listen to idiot friends just watch Naruto episodes you want information how to properly write Naruto fanfic and don't listen to idiot friends my suggestion
Leonard chapter 4 . 1/25/2016
Naruto didn't stop making those kind of promises into after the waves mission it was afterwards he realized that he has to make his own way make his own ninja way that happen after the wave mission just so you know you might want to go back I just correct that that's all but thanks for the story
bigfan22 chapter 18 . 10/4/2015
DAMN...another amazing story gets abandoned. Normally I despise Sakura's character, but this story easily became my favorite where she is concerned. I don't think I've read a fic where a married Sakura comes back in time to help save Naruto and the village. I've read versions where Naruto and/or Hinata do it, but never Sakura. You did such a great job writing her, that I actually began to like the pink haired fan girl. The twist you made with her ancestry was also something I have never read in connection with her, and it was certainly a pleasant surprise. Overall this fic was an incredible read, and I'm a little pissed that such a good story has been abandoned. I'm not sure what real life is like for you right now, but I really hope one day you will have the time to come back and continue this excellent story. Thanks for giving us what you have written so far, and great job!
Lerris chapter 18 . 6/28/2015
This is good, if incomplete...
Great chapter 18 . 4/27/2015
This was interesting, although I wonder why you insist that Sakura must not tell anyone. Oh well, will love it when is SxNxH. Looking forward to more!
TMariee chapter 18 . 4/4/2015
Wow this is great I wish there were more!
firebluebird2006 chapter 18 . 3/22/2015
are you going to continue this?
edboy4926 chapter 18 . 12/16/2014
Awesome story
Please continue this.
Unknown2112015 chapter 18 . 11/3/2014
Okay, this one was good and I would like to see another Chapter. I have become addicted this story as well a few more. Darn it, I have to find another to read until another chapter is added to this one or the others that I like and became addicted to.
ArrogantlyPessimistic chapter 18 . 10/23/2014
So... does that mean Sakura's gonna die? Cose I don't want that to happen! Let things happen there own way; let Hinata let go of her crush, Sakura love Naruto and him her. Why can't this stuff just happen!? Cose U gave us the impression that Saku's gonna die and Hinata and Naruto are gonna live 'Happily Ever After'! Anyway, it was good, but no offence, if this turns out to be NaruHina, ima take this off my Favs. Kay? It was good though. Can't wait 2 see what happens next.
zombiekins5948 chapter 18 . 10/13/2014
What. I don't want Hinata x naruto. I want narusaku and I will get that. And please don't let naruto or sakura die please
arms chapter 18 . 10/1/2014
When the next chapter. Its such a trilling story I can't wait for the rest.
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