|Reviews for Brogans|
| Actually-Fen-Harel chapter 1 . 8/26/2012
Looks awesome so far, can't wait to see more :D
| AnimeL.O.V.E.R.YA chapter 1 . 7/15/2012
I know its been awhile but this is good I would love to read more. :)
| Blind Bay chapter 1 . 2/24/2011
I love the dynamic between Wrex and Shepard, I can see the whole thing in my head so clealy. Please continue!
| Bugsie70 chapter 1 . 11/3/2010
Oh wonderful start Stephi, your Shep is such a badass I love her. I love the banter between her and Wrex too, very natural. And I like the way you described the conditions they were in, there was a strong sense of the foulness Shep felt. Looking forward to more.
| ghost.713 chapter 1 . 10/30/2010
I approve of this, and am looking forward to more with great anticipating! The world needs more Wrex, as well as ShepardWrex ADVENTURE! This may have been a fill intended for one person, but I suspect it will bring lulz and joy to many more, myself included. ;)
| lyssalu chapter 1 . 10/27/2010
oh i like this
this first paragraph
they are pretty boss
i like that i'm immediately in shepard's head
and her personality
the little glimpses of it that i got just from two paragraphs
i love her
being /pissed/ instead of frightened or like overwhelmingly concerned
this is the first thing of yours that i have read, and i can already tell that you're a humorous author. the way you're presenting this situation has made me laugh as well as feel concerned for her well-being. the nastiness you described, it's like, i can smell it
and it's gross
"Shepard!" His voice was closer, but sounded like it was coming from above her, echoing around her.
"Shepard…" Closer, it almost had her laughing. She muttered, "Marco…""
you describe things with so much detail in so little words - that's a talent i wish i had. seriously packs punch.
the setting for this
these shepard/wrex interactions are so fucking great
this made me laugh rly hard
i can hear it so perfectly
gosh i love wrex
IN THE WATER
that was scary
"Her shoulder complained forcefully with each inch. She hissed and he laughed, "Don't tell me a little jartik is going to make you whimper like a whelp.""
is this shep/wrex romance
can it be
i am weird.
"Growling low in her throat, she got her hands in front of her and then, without warning, charged him. He had enough sense to not move out of the way and the force of the charge was enough to socket her shoulder back into joint while she shouted a few choice obscenities. It even knocked him back a few steps. "Want me to fix your hair too?""
this is good.
can't wait to read more of this.
| Ryoko Metallium chapter 1 . 10/27/2010
This story makes me miss Wrex! Write more soon!
| Thessili chapter 1 . 10/27/2010
I really enjoyed this ;) I'm so pleased this is the start of a longer fic, as I really like the dynamic between these two. Looking forward to more.