Reviews for Brogans
Spyke1985 chapter 1 . 8/26/2012
Looks awesome so far, can't wait to see more :D
AnimeL.O.V.E.R.YA chapter 1 . 7/15/2012
I know its been awhile but this is good I would love to read more. :)
Blind Bay chapter 1 . 2/24/2011
I love the dynamic between Wrex and Shepard, I can see the whole thing in my head so clealy. Please continue!

"Wrex..."

"Shepard..."

:D
Bugsie70 chapter 1 . 11/3/2010
Oh wonderful start Stephi, your Shep is such a badass I love her. I love the banter between her and Wrex too, very natural. And I like the way you described the conditions they were in, there was a strong sense of the foulness Shep felt. Looking forward to more.
ghost.713 chapter 1 . 10/30/2010
I approve of this, and am looking forward to more with great anticipating! The world needs more Wrex, as well as ShepardWrex ADVENTURE! This may have been a fill intended for one person, but I suspect it will bring lulz and joy to many more, myself included. ;)
lyssalu chapter 1 . 10/27/2010
oh i like this

this first paragraph

your descriptions

they are pretty boss

i like that i'm immediately in shepard's head

and her personality

the little glimpses of it that i got just from two paragraphs

i love her

being /pissed/ instead of frightened or like overwhelmingly concerned

yes

love

this is the first thing of yours that i have read, and i can already tell that you're a humorous author. the way you're presenting this situation has made me laugh as well as feel concerned for her well-being. the nastiness you described, it's like, i can smell it

and it's gross

""Shepard?"

"Wrex!"

"Shepard!" His voice was closer, but sounded like it was coming from above her, echoing around her.

"Wrex…"

"Shepard…" Closer, it almost had her laughing. She muttered, "Marco…""

sdkfksdjhf

that part

killed me

you describe things with so much detail in so little words - that's a talent i wish i had. seriously packs punch.

...

the setting for this

is perfect

ahhh

plot

plot already

miraculous

plot

loves.

these shepard/wrex interactions are so fucking great

""Find something?"

"Yup.""

this made me laugh rly hard

like

idk

just

wrex

wrex

"Yup."

i can hear it so perfectly

gosh i love wrex

OH SHIT

SOMETHING

IN THE WATER

IT'S ALIVE

well

...

well,

that was scary

"Her shoulder complained forcefully with each inch. She hissed and he laughed, "Don't tell me a little jartik is going to make you whimper like a whelp.""

laughing hard

...

is this

is this shep/wrex romance

can it be

am i

...

i am weird.

anyway,

"Growling low in her throat, she got her hands in front of her and then, without warning, charged him. He had enough sense to not move out of the way and the force of the charge was enough to socket her shoulder back into joint while she shouted a few choice obscenities. It even knocked him back a few steps. "Want me to fix your hair too?""

loooooooooooool

oh gosh,

this is good.

seriously.

can't wait to read more of this.
Ryoko Metallium chapter 1 . 10/27/2010
This story makes me miss Wrex! Write more soon!
Thessilian chapter 1 . 10/27/2010
I really enjoyed this ;) I'm so pleased this is the start of a longer fic, as I really like the dynamic between these two. Looking forward to more.