Reviews for 16 and Pregnant
Pit chapter 6 . 6/7/2016
Vampgirl Bitches Biteme chapter 7 . 8/25/2014
write more plz
Riddle's Parseltongue Princess chapter 7 . 4/26/2014
KitsuneLover05 chapter 7 . 10/9/2011
Please update I'm in love with your story lol
crazy-chick-4life chapter 7 . 8/1/2011
Love it
shyshy1016 chapter 7 . 7/31/2011
that was sooo cute of him... i am scared of what is to come though... i dont want him to leave her when she gets pregnant and has the baby... i want them to be one of those rare cases where it works out...
Katarzyna88gb chapter 7 . 7/31/2011
Good chapter :) all the best and I can't wait for next ones
unknown 020202 chapter 6 . 7/21/2011
xoxo42 chapter 6 . 7/12/2011
i love it they are sooo cute!
shyshy1016 chapter 6 . 7/11/2011
that was a cute chapter... i hope thnigs stay this good between them... the genre says hurt and comfort so i know ts bound to get ugly i just hope its not between the two of them...
jenlam01 chapter 6 . 7/11/2011
More please!
shyshy1016 chapter 5 . 7/11/2011
i really like this story i hope you start updating regularly...
drtammy1511 chapter 3 . 7/11/2011
I would've loved to have read your story, but the spelling and grammatical errors have finally gotten to me. I truly hate it when someone doesn't know how to use the words they're, their, and there. That is one of the most annoying things ever.

In addition, the consistancy in your story leaves something to be considered. In chapter one, you say that Bella is 16. In this chapter, you say that she is almost 16. In chapter one, you say that Bella is a Junior and Edward is a senior. In this chapter, you have both of them in biology which is a freshman class. They might have been in AP biology, but you should've specified.

At this point, I don't think that I can continue to read this story. You definitely need a beta to assist you with all of the grammatical mistakes. I hope that you can find someone who can help you. Good Luck.
crazy-chick-4life chapter 5 . 7/11/2011
love it
crazy-chick-4life chapter 4 . 5/16/2011
love it
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