Reviews for LAMTAF 2: La Famiglia
mounds01 chapter 23 . 9/17
I have just read LAMTAF and now the sequel I love both stories, please continue on the sequel it is very good. I have laughed and cried through this story you make the reader feel as if they are a part of the story. Great Job! I read most of the story on your blog until I got to chapter 17 and for some reason it wouldn't let me go any further so I had to finish on fanfic. Have placed you on alert.
Guest chapter 23 . 6/11
I really hope you continue this I absolutely love this story and I do agree with everybody Bella needs to stop leading him on like that knowing Edward still wants to be together but a relationship is a two way street so they both have issues they need to work on and stop trying to hurt each other
InksFire chapter 22 . 6/1
Ya know sometimes i just want to walk up to Bella and say, "If you want to be with Edward, be with Edward. Deal with your shit, fix your relationship with him. Don't fucking lead him on!" I do wonder if I'm the only one thinking this. It's frustrating, being a couple is a two way street, both sides work together. And if they BOTH, Edward to because lord the shit he has done, want to move on, they Both need to lay it out all on the table. Not tip toe around it with hidden animosity and sex. Tool - Pushit Salival always comes to mind when reading this. The Lyrics really match. And... Can I just say... Fuck Giles. The guys a prick. And all the other girls Edward was with as well. I hate them too. If this is HEA, boy it's gonna be a long road, but lately its been getting sadder and sadder. At least for me anyways. Great
Story though, and I hope ya continue it!
InksFire chapter 23 . 5/31
Really do hope Bella doesn't go with that guy, it'll just open a whole new can worms for ya to write. Edwards made mistakes, and there not gonna really get through it if they don't have a conversation and stop trying to hurt one another. (Whether they admit to hurting each other or not.)They both need to step up and face the music, whether they like it or not as well. Great Story! Hope ya continue it!
Kristen chapter 23 . 5/27
Re u ever going to finish this shitty sequel? At least complete what u started as u made us hate the characters from its lovely prequel so I guess u do know ur job as a writer. Make them cheat, kill each other or whatever, it's screwed up to like Bella or Edward at all now n hope for a different outcome.. At least let thousands of ur readers know the end to this prolonged numbing piece of Mental story. Or be brave enough to say u quit this story.
EmmettRose chapter 23 . 2/25
Will this be finished?
Guest chapter 23 . 12/18/2014
R u gonna finish this? This is the only story I will read over and over and still be shocked whenever I read it. This is my most favorite story I've read this like 6 times already...i really hope u finish this story
Remee chapter 23 . 12/12/2014
Are you going to finish this?
Fortheloveoftwilight chapter 23 . 12/3/2014
I have to say I am kind of disgusted with bella. I mean how can she keep sleeping with edward knowing what he did? She is pregnant and saying how much she loves her kids but does not care about safety. He could be a disease carrying whore. And all the drugs? I don't think they should be together as a couple anymore. Edward did to much. Maybe friends and co parents?
lynard69 chapter 23 . 11/19/2014
I get that mental illness is a long struggle and difficult on everyone. My own sister struggles with it. However it has taken me this long to muster up the will to read this chapter because I knew it would be more of the struggle and pain. It is hard to read a story that was about power and love and crime then the sequel to be soooooo drastically different. It is hard to watch these characters that we fell in love with become people we can barely stand to read about. I get that this is how real life works, but when reading it, it should not last as long. So I am pleading with your to wrap this up and change the story. Go back to the mafia. Have something happen that brings Bella back or sends her away. Kill Edward off or make him come to terms with his illness. But when every chapter is another spiral into his illness, the story is no longer fun and exciting to read. I am sure I will stick it out no matter what, but I long for the days when he was Bella's hero and supporter while kicking butt all over the world.
elizabeth bennette chapter 23 . 10/8/2014
Will you be updating this story on your blog? Please... thanks.
TaBBZZZ chapter 23 . 9/13/2014
I've been clinging to my iPad reading LAMTAF 1 and 2, I'm obsessed! I'm annoyed at Bella, she needs to stop playing with Edwards head. I get that she's hurting but she has to see it's not right for her to keep leading him on, sleeping with him and then shutting him down. He's messed up, he's cheated, lied and treated her like crap but he is trying. She can't keep throwing it all back at him but still willingly going to bed with him. Can't wait for the next update! Thank you xx
lovelife5 chapter 23 . 9/6/2014
Oh I hate that he had a relapse, I really want to see them be happy and together to take on the world! I hope this story has a HEA for Bella and Edward!
CharlotteKandie1221 chapter 23 . 8/27/2014
update soon!
fernanda.herder chapter 23 . 8/9/2014
I do not like edward or bella, but I love the story, strange huh? Seriously, I do not know if I want them to get together because of betrayals, but at the same time I see that edward is being sick and trying everything to get better, so I'm unsure what to think of the story: P

sorry for the english but I'm Brazilian, so English is not my language
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