|Reviews for Merging Lies|
| Zero Harmony chapter 10 . 2/18/2011
Curses, I was certain the Voice was Black Doom's blood! Ah well, the story did end nicely, even if it had some weirdness in the last chapter.
| kharmachaos chapter 10 . 2/17/2011
Wow, you absolutely blew me away with how this ending. It's really... well, it's making me speechless. Also, I saw that little bible reference there About the seeing? Yup. I saw what you did there. And I like it. Heck, I like this whole thing. Wonderful job. Going to my favorites. Definitely. :D
| amyfan4ever chapter 10 . 2/17/2011
OMG, 3 chapters in one day? Girly, you just made my day 3 *huggles*
So, gonna do a mega review. X3
So, while Shadow and his voice was loading the cannon, I was yelling at my laptop, STTOP! DDDDDX and then when it turned out to be all the voice's fault o3o.. Yay XP Shadow isn't all to blame.
Its kinda confusing, cuz we never learn who the voice is. He's just some powerful guy stuck in Shadow's mind? And then when Shadow dies, he's released? And then whats with the even BIGGER voice and the owl? Cuz no one survived.. o33o DX I'm confused.
But over all, EPIC story. I love it :333 Great job, and Yay Everything was set back to the way it was before XP. I now feel sorry for Shadow.. he has to deal with that killer in his brain... ._. Poor Guy _ Meany Voice.
Awesome, awesome, awesome, awesome, awesome story. I hope you keep going with Emerald heart, your a really good author.
See ya later
| amyfan4ever chapter 7 . 2/2/2011
No killing you? /NO/ KILLING YOU? D8
Well.. You just like to take the fun out of life . *shot at* jk 83 *huggles*
I love this chapter, we get to see more of this /voice/ character. Huh, kinda wondering how he's in Shadow's mind and how he seems to know everything. Interesting idea of that guy, I get the vibe that the voice is male.
Please update soon!
| amyfan4ever chapter 6 . 11/15/2010
Uhh o3o... I have a feeling I should stop being shocked by all this death.. But I can't help it DDDX
That voice is a meany T_T
But this story is going great, I see no grammar problems, your writing is so good. Your doing so amazing! Keep going, I have a feeling this ending is gonna be a bang.. O3o
| Worm'sShoes chapter 6 . 11/13/2010
woah. just. woah. it's AWESOME! :D
| amyfan4ever chapter 4 . 11/8/2010
*Stunned* He.. HE KILLED HER! OMG, THE VOICE LET HIM KILL HER!
Oh, My, gosh Shadow.. You just killed a little girl.. What did she ever do to you! DDDDX
But now you have to get it away from Sonic.. o3o Will he find out about you murdering people?
Oh, Now that I am over him killing small children.. (DDDDD) the beginning of this chapter was.. Interesting, the voice seems to want everyone dead... Why do I get the feeling if Shadow died, this voice guy wouldn't bring him back.. Just go on on his own.. o3333o
Keep going! . *whacked*
| amyfan4ever chapter 3 . 11/8/2010
OMG! The voice just convienced Shadow to go to his death! /Or did he? D8/
This voice is starting to annoy me, he's such a meany. Why do I get the feeling this /voice/ is a person of his own and this isn't all Shadow?
*Btdub, I can't take you over?*
Keep going! I might go insane if you don't!
| amyfan4ever chapter 2 . 11/8/2010
Oh.. my gosh.. O_O
My heart was racing as I read this chapter! Just as he was going upstairs, the clock, and your pwnawesome writing, it all worked!
He killed her? HE KILLED HER? DD8 You better keep writing, cuz I have no idea what is gonna happen next.. o3o Shadow..
I like the voice, he's so creepy.. OAo
| amyfan4ever chapter 1 . 11/8/2010
Ooo, a new story. 83
Well, even though this chapter is close to ST, I still like it. You write very well amiga
DDDD8 What is Shadow planning? *Now I have to keep reading.*
| Zero Harmony chapter 3 . 10/30/2010
Amazingly intresting story, with a good emphasis on plot.
| Lord Kelvin chapter 1 . 10/29/2010
Replace that exuberant gibberish with a real summary. It makes you look like an imbecile.
Which is all too bad, considering the story itself is worthwhile.
Have a nice, abuse-free day.