Reviews for Little monster
ruby890 chapter 1 . 10/27/2010
that was great. cant wait for the update.
imperativa chapter 1 . 10/27/2010
hahaha I love Kid!Merlin fics! There are NOT enough of them! Update soon :D
Kitty O chapter 1 . 10/27/2010
there were several spelling mistakes and grammer ones, too. FOr example, you groan, not grown. You hunt deer... hopefully not dears.

Other than that...

It's a cool idea for a story, and I can't wait to see where it goes!
cara-tanaka chapter 1 . 10/27/2010
You have a few mistakes

"...a force when charging through his body." It should be "went" instead of "when".

"Suddenly, he heard a grown" It should be "groan" instead of "grown"

Other than that, great start. Update soon. I really wanna know what happens next :)
ArodieltheElfofRohan chapter 1 . 10/27/2010
Aw, a mini Merlin! :D haha!

This is pretty interesting so far... can't wait for more! :)

One thing, though: "dear" should be spelled "deer". I saw that in several places... but other than that, this chapter is great! :)
FantasyPixie chapter 1 . 10/27/2010
Haha, very funny plot, can't wait to read more.

BOO you a cliff hanger! Darn...

Update soon, please? :D
FireChildSlytherin5 chapter 1 . 10/27/2010
I can so sweet the look of everyone faces when they saw Merlin turn a inter a child! haha!

Great start.
Genie chapter 1 . 10/27/2010
i hate to admit it but i love cliff hangers to even if they r mean ones. So far so good and i cant wait 4 the next chapter. ]
camelot4eva chapter 1 . 10/27/2010
You can't leave it there. You should have wrote some more.

You and your cliffhangers. Who is this man who wants to kill Arthur?

Update soon please.
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