|Reviews for Tangled threads of time|
| evakname chapter 11 . 2/21
i love this story. really. :D i hope that one day u will update it...
| Me chapter 11 . 1/25
| Minato4Yellowflash chapter 11 . 12/23/2013
I loved this timetravel fic as well! and since you insist that the next chapter is going to be "really good", I simply can't wait! update for me, please!
| CrystalXShine chapter 11 . 10/18/2013
"For the first time, Minato realised that he may not be the only one worrdied about his son's trusting nature." Ah, this line...it's just amazing, just so freaking perfect!
I really love this fic. While time travel isn't the epitome of "original", the way you put this in your story is. The family bonding scenes never fail to bring a grin to my face, and the time travel situation is actually realistic compared to the other fanfics on the site. I really want to appluad you and give you a tasty cookie for that.
Aww, I really want to make this review longer, but I have to go to school soon (there is nothing better then reading extraordinary fanfiction in the monring). So, thank you so much for writing this piece! :D
| L.will.come.back chapter 11 . 10/11/2013
MY GOD REVIEW REVIEW REVIEW!
PLEASE DEAR GOD!
| Sai Hikawa chapter 11 . 10/5/2013
Aww... it's a dead end. It was a very interesting story. Hope it continues.
| Clarilyn chapter 11 . 9/21/2013
Good balance of the light and dark aspects of the story. Look forward to seeing more of this - I'd honestly thought I'd exhausted any and all good Minato fics, and then along comes this story!
| Champion of Justice chapter 11 . 9/5/2013
great story. I can't wait to read more.
| the-ice-cold-alchemist chapter 11 . 8/21/2013
This is sooo kawaiiii!
| NEKO.NEKO.KYUUN chapter 11 . 8/10/2013
uuuuupdate please D:
| Dazed Blue chapter 11 . 7/29/2013
Oh my gosh! I'm dying to know how the battle will turn out! I can't wait to read over lines that describes Kushina's impressive, butt-kicking moments that'll stun Sasuke into thinking he was placed against a formidable, and downright terrifying opponent. trololol. I just want to see the moment where Sasuke realizes fighting against a mom is nothing like what he expects. Herherherr. I endorse Kushina's blood-thirsty nature in here-She has every right to act out on her ferocity! Oh mehgosh! I'm so achhinggg to read it all happennning! Even if the battle doesn't turn out the way i expect it, i just hope it'll be as good as you say it'll be(:
Update soon please and impresss meeee!
| Zlatka chapter 11 . 7/24/2013
Amazing story! Love it :)) thank you
| anon chapter 10 . 6/13/2013
"The answering growl that met him nearly burst his ear-drums. Naruto patted his stomach in fond amusement. He had been stunned to learnwhat the nine-tails felt towards the Fourth and he couldn't wait to tease him about it."
What's he referring to here? What does the nine tails feel towards the fourth?
Also, why is this fic rated 'm'?
| anon chapter 9 . 6/13/2013
It's a silly thing to get caught up on, but I don't want Minato's hair to stay white. He's not Minato without the blonde hair : (
| anon chapter 8 . 6/13/2013
Hey, just wanted to let you know that you've been using the word 'flattered' incorrectly. (I think you mean to say faltered, maybe?) I've seen it twice in your story so far (as of chapter 8, that is). If you hit the ctrl key and f key at the same time on your keyboard, you can search through the text to find where you've used that word before. It makes it easier to fix. You don't have to, of course.
I like your story so far :)