|Reviews for All Wrong|
| Index Uchiha chapter 10 . 12/12/2013
This is a good story even though I was almost crying and listening to sad songs didn't help.
| Dragon77 chapter 9 . 11/25/2013
Grate chapter! I'm happy that you are back and writing again.
| MyLiloITAChIassasin chapter 10 . 11/20/2013
| xXPierceMyHeartxX chapter 10 . 11/19/2013
omg i cried soo hard at the reunion scene. i really appreciate you not abandoning this story and finishing it. it was a pleasure reading it.
| Chiblette chapter 10 . 2/3/2013
Holy friiiiigging god! I seriously an all over the place with this! I freaking love it but at the same time, I cry and I hurt. I am near crying right now! I love you. This story, God, I can't say anything bad about it. At all! It was so great! I read it in a few hours after dinner and before going to bed. I dunno how the bed thing will go now...I'm just gonna be thinking about it! Thank you for writing this! 3
| mikako17 chapter 10 . 8/25/2012
I've never read anything in second person and with the way you've written it, it was quite intimate. Usually it takes a while for me to actually feel and understand the characters I read, but with this it was really easy to slip into Naruto's frame of mind and feel with him (and god was that painful). I really enjoyed this so thank you.
P.S. I will assume that the happy ending is the only ending :D
| UzumakiMatsurika chapter 9 . 7/6/2012
That is so cute! I love Sasuke's blushing face! And Naruto supeior attitude!
| BlueBerryThing chapter 1 . 6/27/2012
Wow... amazing, it's just amazing... i like the way you write the story with the use of 'you' and not 'him' or 'I'. I found it very original and personally, it touches me more than if the story if at the first person point of view. Also, I really like the personification of Naruto, who is just someone extremely nostalgic – if I can say that – and can’t turn the page of what happen in his past and live in the present. As for Sasuke, he’s very mysterious. We know everything that happened in the life of Naruto, but for Sasuke, we only know that his parents or death. It’s kind of special but I also like that.
| WhereMyNoodle chapter 10 . 5/4/2012
The 1'st thing come to mind is. Where all "the good adult" when kid need 'em. Oh yeah their busy rumbling around, how I can forget that?
All flashy, But it was a memory dream so is not been a troubled.
But it's kinda to relieve when you choose Naruto not to die young.
I thought this one been complete, I wrong then.
| mymuses11 chapter 9 . 4/26/2012
i was crying and smiling like an idiot at the end of 8th chapter and at 9 i felt like overdosed sappy rabbit
you could challenge kishimoto for tragedy any day.
i really loved every minute of reading it and even cried so many times that even my sister was giving me weird looks
just one thing
| Dragon77 chapter 10 . 4/25/2012
Grate chapter! I'm happy that you are back and writing again. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
| Hetatoki chapter 1 . 4/25/2012
Sandusky would enjoy this story immensely.
| Shane chapter 9 . 1/27/2012
This was heart warming! I thought Sasuke was going to faint or pass out when Naruto said the words the first time. Too bad we never got to see Sasuke as a Seme. Naruto confessing his love would have been a good time for Sasuke to become a Seme.
| Shane chapter 8 . 1/27/2012
I think Sasuke would have been the light to pull Naruto out of the darkness so therefore i like the second ending better.
| Tripptych chapter 9 . 12/17/2011
I can't even comprehend how incredibly written this is, I have never been so conflicted and enthralled with a story to the point were I've been angry, sad, happy and compleletly satisfied with the ending. What a fucking amazing story.