Reviews for The Truth and the Consequences
Guest chapter 5 . 5/16/2016
Finally Edward put Bella through hell.
Guest chapter 16 . 4/6/2016
Still feeling lost Bella. Obviously Edwards fucked up family didnt care that edward was going to go over to Bella. Alice would know what he was going to do and she obviously did not care. After all "family" comes first
Guest chapter 14 . 4/6/2016
Didnt mean to hurt her? Thats freakin funny. He was a salkerish absuive asshole becaus he was...hungry! Bella never had anything good with "his son" It was all (and still is) manipulation.
Bella is simply a clueless dullard. I thought this version of Bella might be able to figure out that the Cullens just want another play doll to fuck with. They have to fill a lot of hours with activity and Im sure watching Bella like she is a pet doing parlor tricks is...interesting for them. What Bella got to witness is Eddie when he does not get his own way. That is who He is. The other version is him putting on a show so Bella will make the mistake of thinking his a human playing by those rules when he is not.
But expecting better from someone like Bella who really doesnt want to have to live life on its own terms, whose soul is so twisted..well its beyond her.
Guest chapter 12 . 4/6/2016
The fight between Leah and Bella was the most ridiculous thing I have EVER read in the twilight world.
Leah is a wolf. That means supernatural strength and speed even in human form. 50 Bellas could not take her. Trying to force crap down the reders throats is not good writing
Guest chapter 9 . 4/6/2016
Pheremones? Part of the predatory adaptations from the change. The vampires are not human in any way although they can mimic being humans. Bella is being manipulated by Edward. She never understood or cared that her feelings were not natural...or unique. She even observed how Eddie "dazzled" EVERYONE they got close to. The vampires hd that effect on all humans
Guest chapter 6 . 4/6/2016
Bella wants all of the Benefits of what she has with Jake but she does not want to have any of the responsibilities. In other words she wants Jake to continue allowing her to use him. I have never found a fic that has a version of Bella that I like or can get behind. and while always rooting for Jake, the bottom line is getting Bella is no prize. She is selfish, self-centered, twisted and all kinds of ugly on the inside
Guest chapter 4 . 4/6/2016
"If he would only allow himself to be more human..." Uh..but he isnt human. Anymore than a cat or a dog or a gerbil. Bella seems to miss that. They mimic human gestures to fit in but they are not close to being human. No description of Bella and Edward being sexual is ever not creepy and cringeworthy. The guy is a reanimated dead body. Cold, no heartbeat skin as hard as stone. I do not get what is remotely sexy about that. No matter how good he looks he...is...DEAD. I guess Bella is so desperate that even a corpse sounds good. Sort of like a starving person who thinks a cracker is the best meal they ever tasted.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/6/2016
"They are all wonderful..." Uh. NO THEY ARE NOT! . They are all self centered, needy and co-dependent. Deceitful, manipulative and petty. Edwards "love" of Bella is actually based on him not being able to read her mind. He can pretend at least that she is a "proper" lady. Sexual thoughts disgust him. He reads the mind of women that have perfectly normal feelings and desires and Eddie thinks they are sluts. Bella has those same thoughts but Eddie can live in denial because he cant hear them. Not to mention the powerful call of her blood as his singer Bellas feelings are based primarily on the fact that she can have a guarantee of a risk free existence. Eddie will never leave, will always be there. Nor risk of loss or abandonment. Bella is a coward who is unable and unwilling to live life on its own terms. She does not care WHO Edward is ( a murdering abusive misogynist who feels he has a right to make Bella who he wants her to be. He makes her feel weak, unintelligent and unattractive. All Bella cares bout is the prize. The loss of everyone and everything that makes Bella, Bella is a cheap price - so she thinks.
Guest chapter 4 . 11/20/2015
Interesting. but Bela should try it with Jake I think she would forget the ice cube pretty quick. Besides When youre starving they say even a cracker tastes like the best meal you ever had. This is Edward manipulating Bela both emotionaly and sexually. Give and take. Push and pull. Edward isnt ashamed. He is a vampire and a fucking mass murderer. He doesnt even understand the concept. But Bella does. He manipulates her emotions and desires to pull her in. BTW every time a read about Bela and Edward getting physical it never sounds hot or passionate or sexy. It comes of as cold and ugly and more than a it desperate. Being with Jake Now thats hot.
Guest chapter 2 . 11/20/2015
Wow. Jake has a some pride here, a little backbone and is wiling to make sure Bella understands that she hurt him badly, most of these fics make him a male Bela just as she forgives all of Edwards creepy abusive, deceitful conduct he forgives hers. Shame Bella stil doesn't get that the vampires are FAR from perfect. They may look great but thy are selfish and self centered. convinced that they know everything. but they are not human and do not have a human heart.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/20/2015
Nobody in their right mind would let bella continue to use them. I hope Jake has some spine in your world. Far to many of these stories have some agenda where Jake is wiling to sufer any and all indignities just to have a moment of Belas time and even in the books he was not that weak
snow eopard chapter 22 . 5/3/2013
Oh my god that is amazing
Jacobbella chapter 22 . 11/15/2012
Plz plz post up more soon?
jayley chapter 12 . 9/1/2012
ok i have to say it was nice to see bella standing up for herself...but it made no sense, seeing as leah has werewolf strength and that slap would've hurt bella's hand a LOT. and of course any other fighting would've had bella at a severe disadvantage, and with werewolf anger it's just plain dangerous. then there's the fact she still has a broken hand, i mean maybe you forgot about the hand and maybe you changed stuff from cannon about the wolves but even as i cheered for bella, i was like wtf is even happening right now
Guest chapter 4 . 7/7/2012
I like the idea for this story; it makes sense that there would be residual doubt and pain even when Edward returned. I feel sorry for him, though - he genuinely left for her own well-being. Really, everything everyone does is for her. Your version of Bella is extremely grating. She's far too irritable and bitchy.
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