|Reviews for Only a Pretense|
| Guest chapter 31 . 5/26/2014
Bless Teddy, he's so sweet . . . And slightly crazy, lol.
| Guest chapter 17 . 5/26/2014
Damn it! There needs to be three Hermiones.
| Guest chapter 12 . 5/26/2014
I love these guys' friendship. It's such a shame there can't be a Hermione for Blaise.
| Guest chapter 3 . 5/26/2014
Oh my gosh, that was crack! Too funny.
| mythzzrosenov chapter 42 . 5/3/2014
i loved this story...amazing...cried when teddy died is my most fav character in this fic..
| The Bat Phan-Girl chapter 1 . 4/12/2014
This is AMAZING!
| Aloja chapter 42 . 4/4/2014
This story you wrote was made in 2011! and its 2014! wow ANYWAYS
I tremendously love your story. All the characters in my opinion were perfectly portrayed! I always had a laugh every single chapter, my stomach is literally hurting by the end. But I love this story so much. The plot is so unique and intriguing! I also love the fact that you do not change Draco into a totally different person once he was with Hermione! Merlin (Great Im using it now), I can't express my gratitude for being given a chance to read this outstanding story! one of the best I have ever read.
| 4ayftw chapter 36 . 3/27/2014
Okay... first let me say that I have immensely enjoyed your story so far. It's rather well written and I love the way you portray the boys ;)
But this survivors guilt thing doesn't really feel right :(
Somehow I feel Hermione shouldn't be upset because she wasn't selfless enough, but because she was stupid. It was incredibly stupid to try and rescue her parents again without telling anybody beforehand. Harry could have helped somehow and Draco, Blaise and Theodore would have been bloody useful as lookouts at least. She was discovered the first few times, so what gave her the idea it would be different this time? She should have taken some precautions against that!
Survivors guilt would make sense, if the boys were helping her already and were in on her plan from the beginning.
Somehow I can't believe Hermione would be stupid enough to make the same mistake every single time and she never really did have a well thought out plan, did she?She just barged right in... this sounds more like Rons somehow :P
Also... why isn't the Order doing anything about her parents?
Anyways, I hope I haven't offended you in anyway :(
I really like your story and I will definitely continue reading it.:)
I just had to get this off my chest :/
| DramioneMiOTP chapter 42 . 3/22/2014
Such beautiful story! I cannot believe that this was in-beta'ed; you really are a one of a kind writer, don't let anyone else tell you any other way. I love the humor, the angst, the happiness xxx
| drac01sMisunderst00d chapter 42 . 3/19/2014
I LOVED THIS STORY! Way to go! It progressed at a great pace and I loved the Dramione moments especially! If you ended up writing any deleted scenes, please let me know. I would love to read ALL of them!
And I am on Pottermore! Which house are you in and what's your username?
Again, I loved this story and 11 things! I'll definitely be reading more of your stories!
| fadingashes chapter 7 . 3/18/2014
I have read like every dramione fanfics you wrote, and this one is like, the BEST!
Trust me, im not lying when I'm saying your're my favorite author for dramione. You can always make Hermione seem so beautiful, unlike some others who didnt describe Hermione well.
And PLEASE complete Princess in Disguise!
| CrazyForYou chapter 21 . 3/17/2014
I just wanted to say, I love your story, but I was a little disappointed that Teddy, Blaise, and Draco all like Hermes/Hermione. I wish you'd have left just one simply platonic friendship in there, like maybe Blaise . . . but you wrote it so well that I'm torn between Draco and Blaise . . . oh the conflict :/
| drac01sMisunderst00d chapter 27 . 3/17/2014
I'm loving this story! It's a great take and the first I've found with Hermione in disguise. Way to go! I also read 11 Things and loved it (though the end broke my heart *sob*)
I love Teddy and Blaise! Especially Blaise, what a charming gentleman! Aw, but Draco, he's always my favorite! Dramione is the BEST and you've written the best of it that I've read!
| pansmione chapter 36 . 2/28/2014
I LOVED DH 2! I cried even more than you did
And I'm glad Hermione is getting better now.
| pansmione chapter 35 . 2/28/2014
I was in shock in the last chapter, but in this one, I really let loose and CRIED. My poor Teddy baby!