|Reviews for Only a Pretense|
| Anon chapter 12 . 12/30/2013
As I was reading this I found that its strikingly familiar to a Korean drama named You're Beautiful...I wonder if that was your inspiration?
| Stella Purple chapter 3 . 12/8/2013
| Stella Purple chapter 2 . 12/8/2013
Nothing much happens, though I do enjoy the side jokes.
| Stella Purple chapter 1 . 12/8/2013
Finished reading chapter one. It was nothing kike I have ever read before, the idea. Reading on right now. I hope the plot never disappoints me! :)))
| ariaamaliana chapter 11 . 11/24/2013
God I hope Blaise doesn't have a crush on Hermione.
| ariaamaliana chapter 1 . 11/24/2013
Aaah! This is already really good.
| throw.some.glitter.on.it chapter 42 . 10/21/2013
Oh. My. Goodness.
This story, holy hanna- where to even start.
Well first of all I absolutely LOVED the plot line. Hermione faking her own death, coming back as a dude in Slytherin (of all places) to save her parents.
And your characters! I loved them all. Blaise, Theo (oh why Theo, why?!), Draco, Hermione, Harry, Narcissa, Dumbledore and ohmygoodness.
Seriously I could sit here and gush about this for hours.
But to end, let me say I found it fascinating that Draco's been so taken with Hermione so long. Wow. And thank you for the awesome Harry and Hermione friendship element, so sweet. Blaise was seriously one of faves, poor him at the end though. Pity really. AND THEO! I cried like a little girl...he was so sweet and I did not want to accept the fact he had died. And then finally Hermione had to have one heck of a back bone to go through all this drama, ohmy, what a babe that one is.
Seriously if I could give this a medal I would. I loved it and you, please keep on being awesome!
| kyraboo chapter 42 . 10/1/2013
Oh god this was so wonderful!
| Guest chapter 42 . 9/22/2013
I cried when Theo died! He was a great character! Great story!
| You're beautiful chapter 10 . 9/14/2013
I knew this sounded familiar. You watched you're beautiful didn't you? I should know since I've seen it and Draco's basically like the main guy character and Blaise is like the guy that got stood up and... Oh dear gosh that just made me so sad. My heart broke a little. I had my suspicions for a while... And Theo is like Jeremy right? AWE MAN! *sob* WHY MUST YOU TORTURE ME SO?
Uhm. I like the story. Ah... Yeah.
| Seiren Cross chapter 42 . 9/12/2013
I loved it :)
| fanficreader chapter 35 . 9/3/2013
Still crying, i think i WAS in hysterics when Annie asked to hold Draco's hand and the part about Teddy loving her so much wahhh
i still cant believe he's gone it feels like I've lost a friend :'(
| fanficreader chapter 34 . 9/3/2013
I have refrained from reviewing all these chapters because i couldn't stop reading BUT I CANT HELP IT NOW TEDDY'S DEAD. MY ADORABLE LOVELY TEDDY! :'( IM LITERALLY BAWLING. I hope someday I'll meet someone like teddy :'(
When you warned about character death at the start of this chapter i suspected it might be teddy but then i thought you wouldn't be that cruel WELL I WAS WRONG
im sorry i do love you but I hate you right now too know what i mean? I hope there's a very good reason for this
well I'll have to get on reading now the suspense in killing me but I'll let you know im still crying
| dramionefangirl84 chapter 42 . 8/27/2013
loved this story! it was simply amazing. i think i might've read it before but forget. i love it anyway :) hehe i adored how u kept them all in true characters till the very end. xoxo amazing. i gotta read all ur others!
| Iloveyourstory chapter 42 . 8/22/2013
I love your story (hehe) but i STILL haven't forgiven you for killing teddy!