Reviews for Only a Pretense
kriskhil chapter 15 . 2/3/2011
ah draco found dun dun. Is he gonna get mad?
Infatuation-x chapter 15 . 2/3/2011

This is getting somewhat cliche already o_o

Draco finding out Hermes' true identity?

We'll see what comes nxt (:

OH! I bet you have not read this manga yet. It's manhwa anyway.

Witch Hunter.


W-I-T-C-H H-U-N-T-E-R (:

accountinactive321 chapter 15 . 2/3/2011
A Cliffhanger? Seriously? PLAIN MEAN!;) cannot wait for the next chapter! xx
Isabella120 chapter 15 . 2/3/2011
This was bloody amazing as usual...with the exception of the fact the chapter ended way too quickly! Please update soon! The suspense is KILLING me!

Karate Chic chapter 15 . 2/3/2011
O my good gravy! How will Draco act now, knowing that Hemes Austen is reall Hermiome Granger working for the light? When will Blaise tell Hermione he knows? Will anyone ever releave poor Teddy?
94yonders chapter 15 . 2/3/2011
omigawd, omigawd, omigawd!

i was holding my breath the entire time..!

phew,..hyperventilating now... :d

DRACO knows already about hermione!


omigawd! i wonder what will happen to his attitude to hermes already! _

*hearts hearts*

and i really LAUGHED OUT LOUD when draco thought:

'I always thought that Austen's a bit… effeminate. But Potter? I never guessed in my whole seventeen years that he swings the other way.'


my goodness, that was really funny, just thinking about the possibilities

and draco's face...!


harry is soo fun! and teddy is just too cute especially now that

he is jealous... *grins*

the death eater initiation is next month already,

hermione would have to find a way to get draco to help her

and i can't help but think that maybe you

would also drag Blaise and Teddy to the initiation...

dunno, just a guess.. :)

anyways, I REALLY REALLY LOVE THIS CHAPTER,...this really made me

forget my problems namely my projects, quizzes and exams

even for just 30 minutes,...i really have fun reading all your chapters!


ooohh,..and i want to give a suggestion too for shoujo mangas:

Skip Beat

Tokyo Paradise

WallFlower (Yamato Nadashiko)

Yankee-kun to Megane-kun (i think this shoujo, not really sure but its nice :))

Chocolate Cosmos
CheshireCat23 chapter 15 . 2/3/2011
Even Harry noticed Teddy is acting weird!

I wonder if Malfoy is going to let her know that he knows or if he is going to pretend like he never found out.
Kathy T chapter 15 . 2/3/2011
You know.. I really love your chapter names. They make the chapter 10 times more awesome. See, had you named this chapter some thing like "Malfoy knows" or "Meeting with Harry" or something.. well, I don't think it would have had the same effect as "Bromance" does. xD Man oh man. . . I take is Teddy is gradually "accepting who he is" HEHE. And now Draco knows. Can't wait to read the next chapter!

sarah lectrice de hgdm chapter 15 . 2/3/2011
at last malfoy discover the true identity of granger! it was a great chapter! post the next soon please!
Aster941 chapter 14 . 2/2/2011
I dnt knw whether u hv seen this... there is this Japanese series also a shōjo manga "Hana-Kimi"... which sumhw has a lot of similarity... read it if u hvnt...

on nthr note i totally luvd us story so far...

lukng frwrd for the next update...
Anigen chapter 14 . 2/1/2011
i love it.
Fawzie chapter 14 . 2/1/2011

first, thanks for replying to my review :D

hm, it was kinda obv [since its dramione and all] that draco would be the secret tulip person thing. but still i didnt think that hermes[hermione?] would well, actually CONFRONT him. but it was so good! like hermione found out about how draco MIGHT feel soething for her and all... i thot that she would just spy on him and see him maybe release a silent sob or something secretive. loved that part(:

about the gay part, i TOTALLY did NOT imagine that TEDDY [of all people!] would think he was one! OMG, real nice twist to the story!

cant wait to read the rest of it! keep it up~



PS: instead of saying sitting indian style, maybe you could say sitting cross legged? it just sounds funny to me when you say indian style! esp since im an indian in race, im from singapore :D
Karate Chic chapter 14 . 1/29/2011
I love Teddy :)
94yonders chapter 14 . 1/29/2011
omigawd, good thing hermes is actually hermione

i dont wanna make teddy gay or bisexual..!

teddy your soo innocent, it is soo cute!

how i wish i could take you home :3

your like a puppy _

great job to the author! :
nicocolaii chapter 14 . 1/28/2011
yey a chapter for teddie!


i think it's perfectly okay if teddy is taking on a fancy on our dashing Mr. Austen because i think men can smell a girl in disguise! hahaha :)))

Oh well. Men and their talents.. hahaha :))))
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