|Reviews for Only a Pretense|
| Nicconicco chapter 6 . 12/3/2010
You are so brilliant! I always jump of joy whan I get a mail that you've updated! however, once a week is too little! why not two! It will almost be a whole year until we'll be able to read the last chapter! it's toooo long I tell you! TOO LONG! I love that Blaise knows! And I also get the feeling that Dumbledore picked that spot because he knew Blaise would be there! And Teddy is just so sweet! I get this feeling that he's... gay? I'm sorry if I'm wrong, but "where's Draco? I miss him so much!" that really got me thinkning: "hey, is Teddy gay?" I bet I'm wrong, he's probably just very very sweet.
back to Blaise; he won't tell anyone will he? and how long will he keep it from Hermione! :)
Thank you for updating! :)
| CheshireCat23 chapter 6 . 12/3/2010
I think Blaise is going to have a lot of fun making Hermione all awkward and will tease her, haha.
| fantasia-49 chapter 6 . 12/3/2010
so blaise know about hermione ho ho! i wonder what will happen then! I presume it will have some funny moments!
excellent chapter really i laugh with teddy!
| 94yonders chapter 6 . 12/3/2010
mmhh..narnia and harry potter, interesting..they do have a lot of similarities..! and if you do continue that cross over, man, would it be cool, for more of prince caspian, i find him sooo handsome *O*
lolz, that's my comment...
now for the chappie! i am now full of excitement for the next chapter!
i was also thinking why would dumbledore, have their conversation in the library, when he probably knows that blaise is there, (coz dumbledore knows all)
and then it hit me at the last part, dumbledore DID IT ON PURPOSE! ha, my goodness, serves me right for doubting dumbledore :P
dumbledore is just so awesome!
now, i can't wait for blaise's reaction! and i believe, the next part would be situations that could threaten to reveal hermes secret!...
ooohh,...and i hope DRACO would be in the next chap already, i miss him nah..!
AWESOME JOB, AS IN IT WAS AWESOME TO THE MAXIMUM LEVEL!
| nicocolaii chapter 6 . 12/3/2010
cool way of revealing :))) hahaha
i miss draco though :(((( i'm just so used of your one-shots with Draco in every scene...
yeah i from the philippines so i get the updates the morning or the evening of a thursday.. i just wanted to know the time :)))
| Xx-Ice-kun-xX chapter 5 . 11/29/2010
This story is like what would happen in real life if Hogwarts was existing! Reading this makes me wish that I was living in a world like Hogwarts...
| Krabby Patties chapter 5 . 11/28/2010
I'm enjoying this so far! :)
| nicocolaii chapter 5 . 11/28/2010
awww... teddy is just sooo cute :)))) wish u'll answer my last question in your next update :)
| juhmacol chapter 5 . 11/27/2010
I almost never review the stories i read, but i had to review yours!
It is a great story, so creative, and different!
I LOVE IT!
Just keep doing this great job...
And, by the way, i looove Teddy and Blaise : )
I love how you show the other side of the Slytherins :DDD
That's it for now, i'm just waiting for the next chapter
| flamingbunnies chapter 5 . 11/27/2010
I am so glad that Teddy accepted her apologies (with the help of sweets. I can't wait for the next chapter!
| 94yonders chapter 5 . 11/27/2010
yeay! i am sooo glad, teddy is back to his adorable self! :))
| Karate Chic chapter 5 . 11/25/2010
Way to be optimistic :)
| Kathy T chapter 5 . 11/25/2010
Ahahaha! How adorable! D It's amusing to know how much of a child Theodore really is. x] And it's also nice to know that Hermione is getting to be better friends with them. :D Can't wait until the next chapter! :D
| Isabella120 chapter 5 . 11/25/2010
amazing as ever! Update! And yes, def see the 7th movie part 1, it's awesome(aside from too little draco malfoy screen time but hey we should be used to that by now *rolls eyes*)!
| procrastinateur chapter 5 . 11/25/2010
I can't wait for the next chapter!