|Reviews for Will you be my Mommy and Daddy?|
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/26/2012
is it a all human story?
did carlisle make an immortal child? O_O
| caseyrn12 chapter 4 . 7/9/2012
tee hee hee too cute, loved how u show how much edward cares about nickie, n yet so does esme n carlisle. N edward left but realized after the fact how much he hurt everyone n esp his sister..great job
| caseyrn12 chapter 3 . 3/20/2012
thats adorable..nickie talkin to the flower n it's called greg..priceless..n yahoo carlisle got his groove on!
| wandamarie chapter 3 . 3/20/2012
| DS-Retired456 chapter 3 . 3/20/2012
Seems interesting so far. You should put more of a back story in.
How did Esme join them? Are you going with plot that Carlisle changed her or was she changed before? And Nickie. Did Carlisle actually change her or is she a human child? And how did she join him and Edward?
Also, your grammar needs some work.
Other than that, it seems like it could make a good story. Keep going. :D
| TrueLoverxx chapter 2 . 10/3/2011
This story is really its awesome! goodjob :) plz keep going
| ToTaL aCtReSs chapter 1 . 3/29/2011
I Likw your idea, but I think your changing the idea of Twilight WAY to much.
| renderedmotionless chapter 2 . 2/22/2011
really pleez update agh im in need of a good fanfiction but good story
| MalikaiDragonSlayer chapter 2 . 2/19/2011
This is too cute I love it. UPDATE!
| wandamarie chapter 2 . 1/2/2011
it is a good one thanks keep up the great work
| wandamarie chapter 1 . 1/2/2011
wow it was a sweet chapter thanks
| gracattack chapter 2 . 1/1/2011
BRilliant chapter love it please update
just one request: could you space out the sentences a bit please!
PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOooon
| MRS.CULLEN1122 chapter 1 . 12/7/2010
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwweeee so sos so sooooooo cute!
I serioisly loved this
lil nikki is soo adorable
Loved it sooo much! _
| Jalice Whitlock Hale chapter 1 . 11/4/2010
Awww! That's soo cute! Is there going to be more? Hope so!
| night1001 chapter 1 . 11/3/2010
awwww, the ending is so cute!