Reviews for Exile
royalcatniss chapter 47 . 4/5
I also found this story via Reddit and I am absolutely grateful for having the chance to read this. Draco’s story was surprisingly inspirational and his determined struggles to navigate the muggle world and absorb as much knowledge as possible were wonderfully carried out.
mekareami chapter 47 . 3/11
This is a great story. I am so happy I followed a reddit link to it. Very much looking forward to reading the sequel. Thanks very much for writing
Pokybyte chapter 47 . 3/4
This was a great story and I’m looking forward to seeing what else is on your profile. I dearly hope Draco’s life and sense of self-worth improves!
ToMyMuse chapter 47 . 2/24
I so enjoyed your story, the way you wrote Draco, his journey, all of the original characters, and your writing style. Very original and drew me in immediately. Thank you for sharing it with us.
ToMyMuse chapter 38 . 2/23
The whole cash machine scene was adorable. Reminded me of a Sleepy Hollow episode from years ago when Ichabod went into a modern day bank and was thoroughly disgusted by the lack of trust the bank had in its customers...because they had ballpoint pens chained to the tables. Ha!
ToMyMuse chapter 28 . 2/21
This chapter is a great example of the writer’s incredible world-building skills. I am utterly absorbed by how Draco’ learns about the muggle world. Brilliant!
ToMyMuse chapter 18 . 2/19
I think this is my favorite chapter so far. This version of the battle and Draco’s view of it was so moving. Beautiful writing. Thank you.
pipib chapter 41 . 2/16
Love the story but am having a really hard time reading the letters. Are they supposed to be in one long word?
I’m dyslexic so it’s next to impossible for me to read them. But I really like the story despite that.
The-Capricious-One chapter 47 . 2/6
This was such a beautifully written story. I really, really loved the characterization and the slow path to adulthood. Thank you for writing, I loved reading it c:
The-Capricious-One chapter 1 . 2/6
I'm so desperately curious what he said under veritaserum that made everyone so grim...
aaapplexxx237 chapter 1 . 2/2
This is amazing!
Guest chapter 3 . 1/7
Grandpa Abraxas really be coming through
Beatraoz chapter 47 . 12/31/2020
What a great story, definitely worth the read!
Justine chapter 47 . 12/27/2020
Wow, well done! I was looking for a Draco-centered fic and this 100% delivered! Loved how introspective and realistic this was. I've been reading fanfic for almost a decade and this story is definitely in my top 5 ever. Thank you for writing and sharing!
ate-some-chips chapter 10 . 12/1/2020
You do not write characters as they're idealised in most people's heads, you write people with problems going about their way to solve them. People have emotions, flaws, idiosyncrasies, they don't just make the plot come true, they live their lives. In particular I relate to your Draco on a base level, we share much the same problems and resolutions to them. As far as criticism is concerned, all I have noticed are smaller flaws, words rearranged, words misspelled, sometimes a grammar mistake. I'd say that the way you write, Draco going from encounter to encounter, is very well paced, it doesn't feel rushed or like particular situations go on for too long
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