Reviews for Loved For The Better
Book Lover chapter 29 . 4/16
Why did Bella leave?!
EchoLynn chapter 26 . 9/16/2016
I think the volturi were watching them... That's why it was important.
AshleyStewart09 chapter 42 . 8/20/2016
This series was very good, you had me crying, laughing, and a few times commenting out loud lol. Thank you for writing this.
anonymous chapter 13 . 3/13/2016
I bet Edward and Cheye are mates -_-
TinaF chapter 41 . 4/8/2015
Wonderful story!
TinaF chapter 8 . 4/6/2015
Wow loved this chapter.
felicia.poole.10 chapter 2 . 2/5/2014
Hello my name is felicia, and am a bit confused about the story? To me it feels like you jump parts. Cause in the frist story there no manch of sex anywhere. And then all a of sunted there a baby. So can u what clearfly were your thoughts were at the time you were writing this i mean there no backstoy leading up to the baby
twlightbella chapter 41 . 11/10/2013
Bella is changed into a vampire by Jasper.
zer0angel83 chapter 42 . 6/10/2013
I very much liked this story. It is honestly one of the sweetest Jasper/Bella fanfics I've read. I also liked the way you portrayed Bella. I feel as if you stayed true to her character, yet made her so much better than how Stephenie Meyer made her. I strongly dislike canon Bella, but that's my own issue. The only thing I took issue with was Jasper and Cheyenne's relationship. I feel like that was the sort of relationship Bella and Cheyenne should have had. Or maybe even have it equal. I just felt that since Bella obviously carried her in her womb for so long and mostly alone, there should have been a truly special connection there. Maybe you were trying to make up for the fact that Jasper wasn't her biological father, but, I still felt Bella should have had the strongest relationship with her daughter and it really made me sad when Cheyenne rejected her almost all the time. But otherwise...I enjoyed the story.
chanur chapter 25 . 3/26/2013
Great chapter, excellent story. Your writting is great and I read with much enjoyment.
ASongbirdDigna chapter 42 . 3/13/2013
Great story! I laughed, I cried, I got mad. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Adding to my favorites as well as Changed for the Better. Really well done.
ASongbirdDigna chapter 36 . 3/13/2013
Ok (let's out deep breath) I thought she wasn't going to let him change her and he was either going to have to watch her die or change her anyway and have her wind up hating him. Glad that's settled. My only little tiny piece of criticism is the whole waiting until her heart stops beating part. It has been clearly stated in Eclipse and Breaking Dawn that the heart has to continue beating or the venom won't work. Just a thought. I know this story is complete and it does no good to tell you now, but you know, for future reference. OR maybe you do know that and are just lulling us into a false sense of hope and you're going to kill her off anyway. That would really sick.
ASongbirdDigna chapter 19 . 3/11/2013
Ok that's better. Thank you :-)
ASongbirdDigna chapter 18 . 3/11/2013
Rude! They finally make love and we get no details!
SwanCall chapter 41 . 1/4/2013
I don't even have words to express what I think, the WHOLE story was just amazing. The fact you didn't follow really the story was probably the best part. Why keep to the norm? It was just breathtakingly amazing from beginning to end and I hated have to pause with it for even a short time. I think this has to be one of my absolute favorite Jasper/Bella stories I have read and there are quite alot. You did an outstanding job with both stories and breaking them apart I think worked well.

Thank you for trying a different approach than the rest of us with the story and totally taking it away from what we all have seen and read. I think it was perfect and was glad I chose to pick it up and read it. So thank you again for writing it.

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