Reviews for The Deal
TheBlackBane chapter 4 . 9/22/2015
Very nice chapter, enjoyed reading it. Keep up the effort and great work, although it's a bit odd when I read ''Draco was supposed to be a woman''. Nevertheless, awesome.
TheBlackBane chapter 1 . 9/22/2015
I like this, but for me as writer I love adding mystery to characters. I never reveal a character's sexual attraction verbally, as in ''Date me, I'm gay''. I just rather let the tension build up through many chapters instead of putting it plain, speak through actions instead and keep a good story between the character based on past and etc, events. Nevertheless, enjoyable to read.
natsuki23 chapter 18 . 7/8/2013
So sweet! I love this story!
mattdombast chapter 18 . 1/6/2013
looking forward to more
mattdombast chapter 17 . 1/6/2013
yeah they need to marry
mattdombast chapter 16 . 1/6/2013
dame harry your a ass
mattdombast chapter 15 . 1/6/2013
ron's a dick
mattdombast chapter 14 . 1/6/2013
i hope harry forgives draco
mattdombast chapter 13 . 1/6/2013
how sweet their first time
mattdombast chapter 12 . 1/6/2013
really brilliant
mattdombast chapter 11 . 1/6/2013
so swett love that harry is being genital
mattdombast chapter 10 . 1/6/2013
i hope harry in draco marry
mattdombast chapter 9 . 1/6/2013
yeah he killed that bastard
mattdombast chapter 8 . 1/6/2013
so good want more
mattdombast chapter 7 . 1/6/2013
yeah rita stuck in bug form
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