Reviews for Waiting For Wormtail
Badly Behaved Rabbit chapter 1 . 12/29/2012
I didn't think it was rough at all. It was very well thought out and I like the narrator voice in it. I loved the subtle hint James leaves, it was adorable! :)
pretendI'mGone chapter 1 . 8/29/2012
Aw, how sweet. I loved this, quite a bit :)
HarrisM12345 chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
Very sweet! I love how James subtly admits he sent her the flowers
Kitro Kat chapter 1 . 1/17/2011
It's awesome. I like the narrative too. x3
ToxicRainfall chapter 1 . 1/9/2011
I loved the narrative voice in this! It was funny, and very clever sounding, as well as realistic. I loved it, and especially found this bit funny: "waiting for Wormtail (which James notes could be a good name for a book of some sort... perhaps a short story?)". Loved it!
melody106 chapter 1 . 12/21/2010
ah, bob and jane )
carolina chapter 1 . 11/3/2010
More! THIS WAS AWESOME!
toolazytologin chapter 1 . 10/31/2010
gigglegiggle I love the story. No mistakes; not overdone; not too cheers!
tasha27 chapter 1 . 10/29/2010
wow. this was absolutely incredible! wow...That was amazing. I'd love to see a companion piece, though its perfect on its own!

so going on my favourites!
digitalmonster911 chapter 1 . 10/29/2010
Yes, I did like it. Very much. The dry tone of the narrator really put a different spin on an otherwise straightforward story.
SamsSmiles247 chapter 1 . 10/29/2010
aww that was great. i really liked the way you wrote that and the last line...pretty please a new chapter:)
AngelofLight95 chapter 1 . 10/28/2010
this is very sweet and really well written, i love it!
hideyowifehideyokids chapter 1 . 10/28/2010
I really like the narrative voice too ;) Its written so well -) I loove it :)