Reviews for Things That Have Not Yet Come to Pass
AndurilofTolkien chapter 1 . 4/23
LadyLindariel chapter 1 . 1/24/2016
I read this story a long time ago and it creeped me out and to this day it still does! However, I thought that she killed Lindir. Anyways, great job but why in the world would Elrond still keep that doll? I would have burned it a long time ago.
quarterhorseranch chapter 1 . 12/24/2015

This is really creepy.

And awesome.

Guest chapter 1 . 12/9/2014
This story gave me nightmares for a week, but it was still awesome.
Lillz chapter 1 . 3/12/2012
so very dark, and very sad. what an unhappy story. brilliantly written, tho (again!) excellent idea

Seryan chapter 1 . 3/8/2012
I read this a couple of days ago, and it's just *stayed* with me. Creepy, believable, and atmospheric. A marvelous ghost story and LotR story all in one.
Song in the woods chapter 1 . 12/5/2010
Found this story and read it all in one sitting. Great job on this! It makes you look at fake dolls a little closer and with suspicion.
LOTRlover chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
Terribly chilling and beautifully written. I've put it into my Favorites list.
pendragoness chapter 3 . 10/30/2010
Excellent ;) There are not words to describe how much I enjoyed this story.
Oleanne chapter 3 . 10/30/2010
Ack! Scary! Poor Lindir! Excellent end to a Halloween tale.
MRS. GLORFINDEL chapter 2 . 10/29/2010
Hi, I love your story, it's both suspenceful and sad. I felt myself holding my breath as I read it, waiting to see what would happen next. I can't wait to read the conclusion, this is a great story and very original.
lackam chapter 1 . 10/28/2010
Oh, this is intriguing. I can't wait to read more. Good job.
Oleanne chapter 1 . 10/28/2010
Oh no! Who was standing by the window... A fey spirit part of Celebrian. Elves from ages ago twisted to Morgoth's thralls... I see the beginning of a fine Halloween tale! Great chapter!
Elfinabottle chapter 1 . 10/28/2010
Oooh, this is creepy. And very original. I like it a lot, and I want to read more!