Reviews for The Curse of Modern Technology
Mystique84 chapter 1 . 3/14/2015
I literally gasped at the message sent part, omg! so embarrassing! crying with laughter though at Imogen's endeavours!
Guest chapter 2 . 8/2/2014
Brilliant, absolutely brilliant.
riya chapter 1 . 10/19/2012
riya chapter 1 . 10/19/2012
very intersting
Chrissiemusa chapter 2 . 2/6/2011
I laughed so hard as HB's reaction to the phones in the first place. Wish there was another chapter to talk about Drill's worries about the message and what HB would be thinking but its a great story :) I really enjoyed reading it and found myself so buried in it that i lost a track of the time. Great story, well writte, extermely funny and in character. I love it :)
Princess Sammi chapter 2 . 1/8/2011
Hehehe Awesomeness!

'She might be the most powerful witch we know, but I doubt her abilities stretch to tracking down the source of a random Hotmail account set up in a fake name.


and N-Dubz

LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL They aren't my favourite group in the world but I do absolutely adore

'Playing With Fire'

'No! You can't!' Constance finally succumbed to her temper. 'And if I receive another call of this nature, I will see to it that "N-Dubz" are hexed into oblivion!'

A dreadful realisation that this would become an eternally cringe-worthy memory nestled into the corner of her mind that she'd rather forget.

Poor Imogen ... she nearly got away with it

The girls may have been caught but I imagine it was so incredibly worth it ;)

Just Brilliant dear :)

Princess S

Princess Sammi chapter 1 . 1/8/2011
Sorry for the delay hun.

but OH MY GOD ...

I don't know which bit I liked best:

Between Amelia and her tetris, Miss Bat's customised phone cover ( which incidentally is rocking :D - mine was a diamante tiara but kind of broke after I dropped it in a club one night ahem ... so its now hearts), Fenny & Gris winding up HB with texting, or the sexting omg I could see it coming the minute Imogen started texting Serge LOLOLOLOLOLOLOL and of all the people she could have (accidentally) sent that to *roflmao* poor Imogen - Run woman and quickly!

Ah but nothing worse than sending a message to the wrong person and also drunken texting ...;) but I loved this bit:

'Oh, fuck, fuck, no no no, please no!' Imogen furiously pressed "cancel", knowing all too well that resistance was futile. As the words "Message Sent" blinked mockingly on the screen, she was filled with a sickening sense of horror.

Its a well known fact that when you do realise, just out of time, that you have indeed texted the wrong person, we all desperately hit the cancel button even though we know the action is useless!


Off to read the next chapter now.

P.s Sorry for the delay :)

Princess S

Duchene-fan chapter 2 . 11/23/2010
Loved it!

HB with a mobile!

I hate that feeling when you've sent a text to the wrong person (or the fallout from a drunken text...)
mirrorOfsin chapter 2 . 11/15/2010
Oh it was cringy but so good :D
mirrorOfsin chapter 1 . 11/15/2010

First the Tetris made me laugh, then foxy and then the end! I'm beaming! :D
typicalRAinbow chapter 2 . 11/14/2010
Hehe oh great entertainment :D Everyone was so in character and I thoroughly enjoyed it, espesily Constance's reaction to the nusience phone calls. Poor wee Maudie never does go her way does it? And, OWCH! Poor Imogen! *cringes* (thou maybe HB was just jealous? hehe-oh *recheives the warning look from said teacher. Okay I'll shut up.)

Super awesomeness with computer chips on top *jazz hands*
quintessential-logophile chapter 2 . 11/12/2010
LOLZ! I love this, 1) for the cringe moment that Imogen sent the text, I wanted to scream at my laptop 'don't do it!' and 2) for the image I now have of Constance Hardbroom at an N'Dubz gig XD. Really well written all the characters are in character and I love how many you included in the story. This so would have been an episode if WW aired today and maybe a bit later on in the day :-)
NextChristineDaae chapter 2 . 11/11/2010
W-A-Z-Z-Z-Z-Z-Z-Z-Z-Z-U-P! ;)



Smashing end to a briliant start, lol!

So in-character, and I thought the concert idea was fab! (Incidentally, um ... who are they?)


Moving swiftly on ...

It really was so good; considering at the time of the show phones were not exactly the accessorie to have (I remember my first one - like a brick!), yet, unsurprisingly, you've brought it up-to-date beautifully and it would slot into the show (albeit after 9 p.m.) perfectly.

Even in a short story your language is lovely to read; I cannot tell you enough just how superbly it flows off one's inner tongue.



RainbowAquila chapter 1 . 10/30/2010
Sorry I seem to be having my modern tech curse at the minute. Alright I may have actually just messed up me password beyond the point of caring but, anyhow REVIEW BECAUSE IT'S AWESOME :3 I loved it! The tetris, the texting and the sexting! Hehehe everyone's so in character. I partially like Constance's uncertainty of the Foxy text. And poor Imogen, run for it woman!

Ra x

Ps "DP'96 - whoever that is" Would that be a certain grumpy redhead perchance?
Marshmallows rock chapter 1 . 10/30/2010
Oh deary me :)

I don't actually know what I like best in this story - Miss Cackle suffering from Tetris Addiction, Miss Bat's customising her phone, Fenny and Gris being Fenny and Gris or Miss Drill landing herself in quite a lot of trouble. Dangers of multi-way phone chats, Imogen :P fab story xxxx
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