|Reviews for The Laws of Family|
| Pie K chapter 32 . 8/20/2011
Oh my god, please keep on writing. Every time I go on I first check whether you uploaded your fanfic or not. PLEASE DO NOT STOP! You are brilliant!
| WinterSky101 chapter 32 . 8/20/2011
OH MY GOD WAS THAT A MESSAGE FROM MYCROFT?
Sorry if Mycroft was a baddie and that was already mentioned. I'm reading about a million Sherlock fanfics at the moment and I'm having a bit of trouble keeping them straight.
| Roxy Blade chapter 32 . 8/20/2011
Wow. Did not see that ending coming!
| kitsmits chapter 32 . 8/20/2011
YES! Write a sequel to this! And I suppose the other sequel, about how Sherlock and Rebecca met, would be more of a 'prequel'...but that'd be good to see too_. It'd also be awesome to see Jennifer grow up.
But please do a follow-up fic of some sort for this! I have to know what that final call was about (well, specifically who it was from)...I have one hypothesis, but I'm not so sure I like it.
| TheDoctorsMistress chapter 32 . 8/20/2011
Oh my God!
That voicemail was just incredible! I can't believe he'd do that.. well actually I can.. still.. WOW! Does this mean you'll write another sequel..? Or is it just so that you'll have the option to do so? Regardless I loved it -even though it ended with them not being together.. P
| cheshiresapprentice chapter 32 . 8/20/2011
OMG OMG OMG THIS STORY IS AWESOME! IS IT MYCROFT WHO LEFT THE MESSAGE?OMG OMG OMG OMG YOU HAVE TO WRITE A SEQUEL TO THIS PLEASE!
| jeffhardyluvsme chapter 32 . 8/20/2011
*wipes away tears* Oh my freaking god! That was okay...but WHY? You seriously CAN NOT leave it like this! Do the prequel but Mycroft? WHY? I undersand you had a reason for writing this the way you did but my heart has broken.
| Nimblestep chapter 32 . 8/20/2011
Um, the heck? She just leaves him? After faithfully following all these chapters, the first story also, she just leaves? No. Just no. I'm pretty disappointed in this ending. It was great in the first one, but this? Eh..
| Niklaus.Elijah.Damon.Kol chapter 31 . 8/20/2011
This is great, i really want a happily ever after please! I love sherlock and this series has been great.
Keep writing :P
| cuteepiee1 chapter 31 . 8/20/2011
Oh gosh I love this story so much! Please don't kill Rebecca though! I can't wait for more, update soon please ]
| Juliet's Pen chapter 31 . 8/17/2011
Amazing. Simply amazing. I can immediately tell that you have a knack for writing. The flow was good and did not seem overly rushed. The characters are brought to life, there's no other writers that could potray Sherlock as good as you. Your OC is human, she's so realistic. I enjoyed everything, congratulations.
Anyway, two endings eh? Well, it may seem cruel but can you kill Rebecca off? I like her and I hold nothing against her but a happy ending is pretty unrealistic right now, don't you think? Well that's just me. You can do anything you want, it's your story, is it not? ;)
Totally looking forward to your updates. Keep writing!
| mack7180 chapter 31 . 8/15/2011
1) I love this story so freaking much
2)If you kill her i just might ball my freaking eyees out
3)I dont like to cry. Plz dont kill her
Keep on the amazing work
| C'estMoiLiz chapter 14 . 8/15/2011
Lol I winced when I read that.
STUPID NURSE. grrrrrr.
| C'estMoiLiz chapter 10 . 8/15/2011
Ohhh silly Rebecca, why even bother asking?
LOVED THIS CHAPTER. Have you got a beta; the grammar could be improved a little, but other than that it's really good.
| C'estMoiLiz chapter 9 . 8/15/2011
"I knew there was something different about you"
IF ONLY YOU KNEW.
Okay yes there was fluff but I think justified by the circumstances ;)