|Reviews for Magical Mary|
| fhl1234 chapter 3 . 2/10/2011
Good point their. I think you handle the hilarity of the whole Mary Sue thing very well. You write each portrayal of them in a manner that won't offend others. Very well done!
| Evilhumour Author chapter 3 . 10/30/2010
...My eyes will recover one day.
Nah I am joking, this was very nicely done.
| Evilhumour Author chapter 2 . 10/30/2010
Face slam. Wow... just wow.
| Evilhumour Author chapter 1 . 10/30/2010
Liked the ending
| Not Flamin Just Sayin chapter 1 . 10/28/2010
Although I see where you are heading with this, the way you are writing it is just a very dull read for a satire on Mary Sues. It's not always clear if you are being sarcastic, or if you are legit trying to write the Mary Sue as realistically as possible. Either way, if you are writing about characters that can be so ridiculous,be a little more ridiculous!It's like I mentioned earlier,its almost as if your writing them realistically and toning down the ridiculousness of the situation lol I feel like the only time you're really opinionated is in your Rules lol
btw Rule X can be argued -.- ahhh anyway not flamin, cos I do like the concept for Magical Mary and I apologize for my ridiculous use of ridiculous :)