Reviews for Hesitation: A Max Story
NonsensicallyWierd chapter 1 . 12/28/2011
Great Fic. I really enjoyed it. I love the idea of Max and Dom together. I thinnk they'd have an interresting dynamic. Have you considered doing a follow up for this story? Because I think you should.
Dn chapter 1 . 5/27/2011
I JUST LOVE IT! I CAN IMAGINE THAT IN THE MOVIE... IT COULD BE A GREAT IDEA IN THE FLIM... guauuu, es que sencillamente este fic cuadra perfectamente con la peli, dejan tantos cabos suelto y tantos espacios vacios en DEBS que lo q escribiste pudo haber pasado jejeje... ;D
Kaiden13 chapter 1 . 5/18/2011
uhm, i'm kinda new to fanfiction, but i really like this story and i hope you continue it
ScOut4It chapter 1 . 3/7/2011
Classic ending with the 'perfect score' quote.

You really are able to wind up the angst when you want to, Max was an idiot, but at least she learned from her mistakes.

Great idea to parallel the actual movie with a fictional secret history that made sense in that 'I can see that being the case' way if I was to rewatch the film.
yaelssecret chapter 1 . 10/28/2010
so is this the stry of us?


anyway SOO...Amy loved max but since she rejected her now she is with Lucy...

and Max rejected amy beacuse she was now she is qith Dominique...