Reviews for Swamped in Darkness
Ginnylove9990 chapter 1 . 11/15/2011
Great story. I went to your profile to see what other stories you wrote and now it looks like I am going to be reading quit a few of them.

I all so want to let you know that even though you do not know me. I will keep your husband in my prayers. And that the cancer will not come back. Just please keep the faith and I believe your husband will be just fine. May God Keep you and your husband safe in his loving arms.
grecian chapter 1 . 11/1/2010
Nice pace to the story and well written. Liked your monster a lot, wonder if I could get one fer a pet, LOL.
Nana56 chapter 1 . 10/30/2010
This is really good! I loved the hunt, too. Winchesters on the hunt and truly having each other's backs...doesn't get much better than that; unless of course one of them gets hurt and the other has to take care of him. *sighs happily*

This fic had everything a girl could want...a nasty bad thing and injured/worried brothers.

Very nicely done. :)

I'm sorry you have to take some time off, but I totally understand. I'm still praying for your situation. When you're ready to come back, we'll be here to read.

Colby's girl chapter 1 . 10/29/2010
Hardly what I would call a pathetic effort! It was a great one shot of the boys going in, getting in trouble, taking care of business and the clean up after the mayhem that usually ensues.

I'm sorry to hear RL is not letting up and that your muse has decided to play coy and shy with you. Don't worry, I'll still be here when you get back. Thanks for the entertainment.
blue peanut m and m chapter 1 . 10/29/2010
Hey Sis,

Thank you so very much for that, it was as always a truly amazing gift.

Beautifully written, exceptionaly discriptive, and very suspenseful.

Just what a woman counting down to 40 needs, a great limp hurt Sammy story.

Love ya Lil Bit x
skag trendy chapter 1 . 10/29/2010
Wonderful story, hon, with lots of delicious Hurt Sam, and protective, caring Dean.

Just what I needed after a tough week.

Kind regards,

ST xxx
friendly chapter 1 . 10/29/2010
great job.. would love to see a story about when the sprite tried to drown sam..
supernaturalsammy67 chapter 1 . 10/29/2010


amazing concept! LOVED Sam getting poisoned and Dean saving him like that, and what a kick ass name for a creature!

Brilliant read- bloody loved it hun!
vonnie836 chapter 1 . 10/29/2010
I don't know about Peanut, but I certainly appreciated this story. For not having time, not researching and just making up a monster as you went this was certainly completely amazing. I have read stories were people did research and put a lot of time in that weren't this good. So I guess that makes you a genius. I did love the monster. Lots of imagination there and I saw it scaling up that cave wall, heard his purring and the reptile like screams. Those talons scared me a lot and poor Sam not only had them wound him, but also poison him. Those spasms the poison caused had to be horrible. I imagined having a charlie horse or one of those horrible back spasms, only all over and in my lungs. Scary and painful. Your antidote was ingenious, I really liked the idea of it. And Bobby, well understood why he was mad. The guy had to sit on hot coals, waiting for news from the boys.

Really wonderful story. I'll miss your writing, but I completely understand. Take care of hubby and yourself and send me a not from time to time and update me on what's going on. Still praying for you guys. Hugs, Vonnie
1Pagan3 chapter 1 . 10/29/2010
Great story sweetie! I hope everything settles down for you soon... remember, I'm only an email away if you need anything, even if it's just someone/something to yell at. ;) Take care of yourself too, ok?
hotshow chapter 1 . 10/29/2010
I thought this was a great story, but I'm a bit confused about the ending - the part where Sam and Dean are jogging - is that supposed to be after they gotten to Bobby and everybody is healed up?

Thank you.
Madebyme chapter 1 . 10/29/2010
You know there really isn't anything better than a good old fashioned motw fic! This was right up mu alley and I really enjoyed it.

Your really captured the boys well, the sarcasm and wit, the worry and fear and that complex bond they share where nothing is more important than family. I really enjoyed the mix of action and drama with the care-giving and h/c.

Thanks so much for sharing. Take care, Madebyme
SamDeanLover28 chapter 1 . 10/29/2010
awesome story
Heartless BytchhakaHelenBach1 chapter 1 . 10/28/2010
It tore Sam's shirts with one swipe of it's venomous, three inch long talons, raking his flesh to the left of his navel with two long gashes.

Typical Fangirl moves.


I got confused on the ending. Were they jogging after Sam was injured or was he exhausted and sleeping in the Impala?

It's like you have two endings there.

Please explain, very confused.
CeCe Away chapter 1 . 10/28/2010
This was great fun, just what I needed, a real hunt and hurt/comfort with the brothers.

You're a very good writer. Have the boys' characterization down perfectly, their dialogue. And the story itself was great. Interesting creature.

I put you on alert so I won't miss anything else.
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