Reviews for Instinct
Fallen daughter 93 chapter 27 . 5/24
Please update soon. I can't wait to see what happens now that Bella is up, I think it would be good if you break it up into 2 stories that way you can expand the plot and we can learn more about the backstories of the pack and new members that have since joined when Bella was in transition and also more back story and history of Hell Hounds and their ties to werewolves and the vampires royals. :)
merniizztat chapter 27 . 5/16
Great story,update please
crimsonswordblue chapter 27 . 5/12
I like the one big story plan. But please continue it I really like this story.
Antonia23 chapter 27 . 4/30
Love it as allways. All your Story's are amazing.
I really hope you continue this and all other storys soon.
VampHorses chapter 2 . 4/27
You asked, what i would do. Well i would be surprised but happy. I love animals and want to be one as well.
Love your story!
Wolf2468 chapter 27 . 4/23
Please continue please please
Draco Oblivion chapter 27 . 3/8
To be honest I thought you'd have her pull a Michael Corvin, not really sure how I feel about her being a hellhound (is she actually more canine than feline now?) but I guess I'll withold judgement til we learn more
Draco Oblivion chapter 25 . 3/8
Loved Rose in this chapter and it was nice to see Bella deal with her abandonment
Draco Oblivion chapter 18 . 3/7
Hahaha, I take back my reservations. Usually I find lies, at least the big ones, pointless and more trouble than they're worth but if they lead to scenes like this chapter then I suppose remembering a few details and fake stories is worth it
Draco Oblivion chapter 17 . 3/7
To be honest it's pretty hard to manage a suitably horrifying backstory to leave someone suffieciently emotionally scarred to be affected centuries down the line. I thought Bella getting her to see things differently when no one else could manage is maybe a tad cheesy but I can't help but smile. Not a big fan of the fake dating though or elaborate lies in general really
Draco Oblivion chapter 16 . 3/7
Fucking hell Raven, that was the worst attempt at a save I've ever seen and the fact that she then just left Bella to clean up after her was sad but hilarious. Oh wow, they're actually doing this, actually going to pretend to date... Really can't imagine it's worth the effort
Im a Skyscraper chapter 27 . 2/17
I love this story. Update as soon as you can please!
kinetic-kid chapter 27 . 2/9
I'm really, really enjoying your story here. Before I only read story that were completed but I've had an itching for B/A story and wanted something new to read so I came across this one. I'm hoping that you continue to update and as for my two cents, maybe finish 'this' part of the story and then do a second part. That way it is complete on it's own. I know how hard it is to finish a story after a long period of time - got a couple myself that I haven't updated in years and need to get back on the writing bandwagon! LOL Thanks again for your story!
cands123 chapter 27 . 1/26
I love this story and what you've done with it so far with Bella and what she has become hope you can update soon
Daeru chapter 27 . 12/6/2016
I'd keep it all in one big chunk. Especially with how sporadic your updates are because of the novel (which I'd love to hear more about by the way). People who aren't following you as an author but just the story won't know when you start the second half.
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