|Reviews for Flitting|
| Hot elf chapter 7 . 2/27/2012
Soooooo sweet. Zev comforting her in the Deep Trenches had me nearly crying.
You know already that I don't believe in a happy ending for those two, but yours makes me wish so much that it were different. And I love, love, love the way you describe Zev - makes me fall for him again all over.
'One hundred percent heart stopping, beautiful, sexy man.' - really couldn't have said it better myself...
| nobody01 chapter 7 . 11/2/2010
I loved this story. Please update soooooon. :)))
| Carree chapter 7 . 10/30/2010
very sweet, very emotional and very well written you should have more then two reviews
| Rhiononon chapter 7 . 10/30/2010
This is good, there's just a few word snafus, and in some areas a designation between scenes would be awesome. But otherwise? This is really good. (I think the snafus happened from haste, as the first few sections were pretty clear of them, while the last couple were where the bulk of them were).
If you'd like it neatened up, I could do it in a flash.
I like this Cousie (normally I don't care for them overmuch) and the sweetness between she and Zev makes me squee like crazy, thus I'm alerting and favin' this.