Reviews for Unselfish Love
Anonymous chapter 7 . 11/2/2014
Omg, nooo, whyyy? I'm on the verge of tears!
udon'tneedtoknow chapter 8 . 4/16/2012
ino's a biatch...she didn't even know the whole story and yet she goes rampage...that will just make it a whole lot worse...
AnotherLostChance chapter 6 . 12/11/2010
omg :( this is so painfully sad! i love it tho! good job :D
Jacky D Blade chapter 9 . 11/11/2010
The happy ending is better!

A lot!

I hpoe you will write a ShikaTema story again!

Good story!
BLEH chapter 7 . 11/11/2010
i thought it was ok i wasnt really happy about the ending tho when im reading a book i dont wanna be forced to decide how its gonna end thats the authors job frankly i think u ruined it by giving me the option to choose how it would end anyway thanks for ruining a decent story
Hot Mess 12 chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
This is a great chapter and it has a great intro. The only thing you want to make sure of is what tense the stroy is in. You went between past and present tense, and at times, it made it hard to read. Besides that little detail, it was awesome.
BigBootyBaby chapter 5 . 11/6/2010
Can definitely feel the tension. Will you be writing Temari's POV too?
jo chapter 5 . 11/5/2010
poor shika...maru, awwwwwwwwwwwwww, i hope they resolve their issues, they are just too cute not to be together, ;D
MidnightMusic96 chapter 1 . 11/1/2010
It's pretty good. I like how you portray Shikamaru. It makes him seem more interesting than he really is. I hope you update again soon!
Jacky D Blade chapter 3 . 10/31/2010
Great chapter!

Shika became Jounin because of her!


Please update soon!
Bichebleue chapter 3 . 10/31/2010
Aawww ... I like Shikaku ! And Shikamaru is so sweet with her wife, he became adorable ...

Their conversation is so cute, two poor man ... i like them !

But, I hope that Temari isn't really unhappy ...

Good Chapter !
BigBootyBaby chapter 2 . 10/30/2010
LOL! Great one shots.
Bichebleue chapter 2 . 10/30/2010
That's really comic !

I like Shikamaru's personality ... too lazy with an energetic woman.

Good Work !
chubbyass chapter 1 . 10/29/2010
1) PLEASE EDIT! pay attention to verb tenses

2) yeah, temari would be sacrificing either her country or shikamaru. but would shikamaru sacrifice his country for her?