|Reviews for A Town without Eba Yuzuki|
| Pierre chapter 12 . 1/18/2015
Please continue, i love it :)
| Infinity gauntlet19 chapter 2 . 2/20/2014
a great new take on a decent manga. i love how you made haruto and nanami's relationship more organic and natural. it's a shame you couldn't continue writing it. just knowing what eba might do next really got me excited. still great chapter though :)
| Guest chapter 12 . 8/20/2013
one thing that i concerned, why yuzuki is totally like a bitch in here?that's not yuzuki,totally not...im sorry but im a fan of yuzuki, and you broke my fav char for real, dude! what's wrong with you?
| dbzsotrum9 chapter 12 . 6/12/2013
this is a real interesting story, you know, I just reread one of the Mirai Nikki manga's titles Paradox, and I just thought, of how if Eba was being forced to fast forward scenes and went nuts, she might be forced to be like this... I have to much imagination...
oh well, I wonder how this would work, technically speaking, Yuzuki is Haruto's true love, but it would probably never happen... or would it... I for some reason am really supporting Yuzuki in this though normally I have a bit of issues with this pairing... (though I do think Haruto should have a 3 way with Yuzuki and Rin, hell Yuzuki did at one point show that she was willing and Rin would probably join if she had the chance), I had issues with Haruto dating Yuzuki after their break-up in the manga, but I just wanna support this one... there is something wrong with me...
| dbzsotrum9 chapter 2 . 6/12/2013
is this Eba bashing or was she just so mean because she was shocked and jealous?
| kiren chapter 1 . 5/4/2013
enjoyed reading your story ...update more...soon :)
| Deathgeass chapter 12 . 2/17/2013
intresting making yuzuki eba as the bad guy. i like it. and besides i hated her from the beginning i always thought it should have been haruto and asuka. but now i want haruto and nanami
Keep Writing this interesting so please UPDATE!
| KatzeNoel chapter 1 . 2/3/2013
| KeitaroMokoto 4 ever Of The Dark Icon Writers chapter 1 . 2/19/2012
Well, I loved it so far! I just think that you should try to make the chapters longer. Because I just like reading your story so much it feels sad to have it end so abruptly.
But keep the good work up.
| CleanMind chapter 12 . 1/17/2012
Quite an interesting plot.
I feel sorry for Haruto, but seeing Eba so agresive is priceless. Despite the drama and sweet Nanami i would like to see HarutoXEba getting maried. A smart, beatiful and completly devoted girl like Eba could make a man happy (minus her crazy antics). Don't forget that there is another little devil Rin. Will she help Eba with her dreams ?
Please, keep the story alive.
| lostinside1 chapter 8 . 11/29/2010
I think it would be quite interesting to see how the story would work out if Yuzuki did get pregnant but then lost the baby. Can't wait for the next chapter!
| lostinside1 chapter 7 . 11/25/2010
No flame! I know it's possible and I can't wait to see what happens next. I really do feel sorry for haruto in this chapter. Keep up the good work!
| lostinside1 chapter 5 . 11/25/2010
OMG! I like Yuzuki but hate her at the same time. The character development is really good and I am starting to understand how they all are but maybe a little more development needs to be done for Nanami as I don't feel like I understand her well enough yet.
| lostinside1 chapter 1 . 11/25/2010
I like this opening as it really introduces the characters well to me considering I don't know the background to this fic. :)
| Eliya Shirwood chapter 7 . 11/23/2010
"...Wow. Just... Wow." That's the only thought that stimulated in my mind as I read this latest chapter. Without a doubt, you took a rather risque approach to your story embellishing in such a dark impulse through Eba.
Feasible? Surely, you did a fine job portraying the emotions and background that lead to her volition. Necessary? To make your iteration that much more unique, definitely? Hilarious? Hell yes.
I appreciate your exploration at showing the other aspect of rape that is disdained in general by society; as you say, it is a plausible scenario.
Noteworthy commentary: I'd recommend you pay close attention to how you perform transitions from scene to scene. A particular case is at the end of chapter 7 while Nanami arrives for his rescue (knight in school attire, irony). By assumption, one would think the black-suited bodyguard was still in the room as she released him from his bonds, causing a rather confusing scenario regarding why he did not stop her.