|Reviews for Wartorn|
| Yuri and ShoujoAi 4Ever chapter 1 . 11/21/2013
Keep writing fics about Strike Witches, your stories are the best!
| Han dj chapter 2 . 4/28/2013
oh that figurine given to Yoshika by the fleet commander was Tomoko!
I was wondering who the doll was patterned from, and i've seen it three times already (season 1). I need to see season two...
| JJ chapter 5 . 4/25/2013
Was re-watching S1, S2 and the movie for the past 2 days and realized that I missed this fic and your writing so much! Hopefully you will have a new chapter for us someday!
| BSA chapter 5 . 12/28/2012
A very nice work so far. I do, however, wonder if the phrase "Allied bomber" might not be anachronistic in this world; do such things even exist here, and would the "Allies" even be called such? I'm also curious as to if Tomoko and Haruka's relationship will play a role in future events.
| Toby860 chapter 5 . 10/8/2011
not bad but what about yoshika.
| OZ7UP not again chapter 5 . 5/29/2011
My bad, "Numero della Destinataria".
| OZ7UP again chapter 5 . 5/29/2011
Hmmm... Then again, going along with the whole gender thing for romantic languages, it probably should be "Numero della Destinatoria".
| OZ7UP chapter 5 . 5/29/2011
"Numero del Destinatario". You don't need the "di" because it's redundant ("di""il" "del"). Other than that, there's no need to worry about the Italian used - context and spelling aside, it's nearly impossible to butcher the Italian vocabulary. On that note, though, if you're planning on including full Italian sentences in the future, let me know beforehand.
The dogfight with the Neuroi was well-written. It made me feel as though I was part of the action itself.
| PrincessKooh chapter 5 . 5/27/2011
Yay nice update! Hope you update soon
| Spikesagitta chapter 5 . 5/26/2011
Aww Love the bonus fluffs :)
And that is an interesting tactic...ramming a Neuroi...wouldn't that be sort of a kamikaze kind of move if it was timed wronged...
| deathcurse chapter 5 . 5/26/2011
The Sanya/Eila fluff pieces made me laugh .
I hope we find out what's wrong with Anabuki, or at least see her recover, maybe, in later chapters? I wonder if the whole business of being infected will come up again in the plot...
I hope Minna finds a way to keep Mio regardless! D
The Neuroi fight was interesting, but I was more interested in the bits of thought Trude had between the action scenes: such as when she thought to commend/not nag Erica due to her brilliant strategy, when she worried about the safety of the night witches, and when she worried about what Helma was up to.
Poor Helma, she didn't get to have Barkhorn romantically catch her out of the air, eh? _-
And finally, the guy who developed the atomic bomb, eh? I wonder how this will all factor into the plot.
I can't wait to see all the teams together-not only because it would be hilarious to see Minna try to keep them all in line, but also because it would be nice to see the 501 girls reunite once again.
| Crosswood chapter 5 . 5/26/2011
This chapter is truly excellent.
What can I say? I've been looking forward to it for literally weeks; now that it's here and posted it's everyone one could wish for.
Each historical reference makes one grin with nerdy delight; proximity fuzes, yo-yos, a Lt-Col in charge of FlaK... fantastic stuff. Thank you for actually caring; it really shines through in your stuff.
The characters are great fun to watch as well - they interact with wit and good humour. Helma... Helma showing up is the icing on a completely delicious cake. ((I sense drama, however, stemming from her posting to 501 to abound. Is it evil of me to be rubbing my hands in gleeful anticipation?)) In a more general way, it's the fusion of manga and Anime we kinda all wanted, but never really saw aside from brief flashes.
The action, as well, is unrelenting and well thought out. Erica certainly deserves a commendation for the airflow idea - pure genius! And the final defeat of the large bomber! Ahh, but I am ranting.
Thank you very much for a cracker-jack chapter, and sincere regards
| Crosswood chapter 4 . 4/12/2011
And the plot appears! What a cracker of a plot it is as well - sneaky promotions and the promise of battle! It's always fun to watch 'Trude and Erica interact, and one of the major ways we discover them is through their actions in battle. I look forward to Erica's plan with great anticipation.
As for Galland... I loved the historian's in-joke about her and pants in the series, and it made my day when you ramped it up to eleven (only a witch of GREAT POWER can wear pants! XD) I rather like your interpretation of her as a sneaky but bloody excellent commander, by the way; that was rather gold.
Not going to lie to you - I'm a huge Elia/Sanya fan, and was slightly disappointed not to see them... obviously they're marvellous in your sure hands... but I suppose after the awesome line of the last chapter, asking for more would be greedy. _
Cheers for an excellent chapter, and I look forward to the next 'un.
| PrincessKooh chapter 4 . 4/7/2011
Nice story so far! Cant wait 4 more
| LowFlyer1080 chapter 4 . 4/6/2011
Just recently watched all of the 1st season of Strike Witches on netflix, haven't seen the second season yet. I must say I love this story of yours and am looking forward to it's continuation. I'm also going to be looking for the second season of this anime.
No offense against Perrine, though, but I like Lynne paired with Yoshika better. They seem more of a natural fit.